Nhất thống thiên hạ - Reviews

The story has a lot of potential but the bad grammar ruins it,I can understand the fact that english is not your main language but you can have someone proofread and fix your work if possible.

There is nothing much to story. All the characters are one dimensional. the story even his girlfriend getting forced to another guy. There is only face slapping.nothing else.

thought it would be good but its really quite boring---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

literally a scam, the moment you get past the free chapters the translation quality drops, characters change names every chapter, sometimes changing multiple times in a chapter it's just so unpleasant to read.

nothing much .vouching for this book because of that cousin. make him the mc's subordinate. the day cousin is out, I drop this book..

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anyone have the raw title please???ಥ_ಥ

The story develops so slow. It also is very similar to Warlock of the Magus World like Leylin, he got his school admission from a ring, he also has an AI, he is also broke and earns his money from tutoring and making potions, the setting of the school is also about dark arts, wizards were black or white depending on their alignment. Idk if it might develop differently than WoMW

"Esmeralda?"

Kaya...

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As I listened to her speak, I listened to what I was feeling inside. It made me feel a little calmer, a little better, somehow. Then it hit me. She'd done this all on purpose. She led me here to try to cheer me up.