New Origins - Reviews

I really like Tacos tacos and more tacos, With taco sauce and more tacos on top of those tacos  I dont know what I would so without tacos in my life.

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Really a new and interesting plot that you came up with. Liking the way story is going and progressing. The main character is different and keeps getting better. Keep going I can see the  adventure-filled novel ,good story!

good novel, a couple of grammar mistakes but nothing that stops the fun of reading this fun novel, has an amazing idea ans good world building and character building, i recommend reading it

This is a story leaning a bit on the macho side, battle battle battle everywhere, character development is slow, there is no romance ( none whatsoever), most of the battle techniques of the mc are introduced abruptly ( like there is no training or comprehension session, when he's fighting, at the very least second he erupts with a new technique to blow other people's mind),a few stuffs are exaggerated ( damn, I'm giving way too many negative opinions), take the story with a pinch of salt and hopefully you can enjoy it

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"Is it my fault that our father is a fucking bastard? Is it my fault that I have been born out of our father's betrayal that you despise me and always make me compare myself to you? Tell me sister, how high do you want to set the pedestal so I can no longer reach you? Huh? Well, let me tell you something, now, no matter how high you fly, I would not care anymore. But I need to have Yuan-ge. He is the only one who understands me. He is like me. He can't reach those standards you are setting for him. For us." Lingling said with eyes streaming with tears.

And here he is, now walking with the supposedly dead humanoid octopus.

He found his uncle behind his expansive mahogany desk writing. He didn't move to acknowledge him until he dotted a final letter and set his pen down. Eyes meeting Leo's, his uncle motioned for Leo to take one of the vacant seats. Quite unlike Leo's father, Uncle Renwald was a short, stocky man, balding to the degree where only a scant cluster of hair occupied the backside of his head. Leo remembered, also, how his father used to laugh, but he couldn't recall the sound of his uncle expressing any emotion close to mirth.

'' hello?"

Chapter 2: Death is a Beginning (2 of 3)

new chapter release every week! or you can buy the full version in kindle for 2.99 only! just type in dcsalazar (no puns) in search bars of both kindle and amazon