Neet in the Marvel Universe - Reviews

Neet in the Marvel Universe
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Waooooo***.........Bring justice into an unjust world..?This must be one of the besssstttttt boring novel right....?God novel, good ver good you must not read it....Hehhee
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I am... disappointed. I’m at chapter 573. I haven’t seen him properly teach his students other than a pep talk about life. He either uses Soul Imprint or it gets skimmed over. I don’t even know what rank his students are for over a hundred chapters. There is so much potential in his student’s background that the MC OBVIOUSLY can tell but doesn’t do anything. DON’T get me STARTED on his choices with system knowledge. He has had multiple rewards that he could choose the knowledge he recieves. He never chose something to help his LITERALLY DYING students. The time emblems. The Fking Time emblems. My god are they op, But that’s not what I care about. It’s how he hasn’t Spam bought them from the store and used it to get knowledge. He could have used it to learn spirit runes and save Jiang Cheng, HIS STRONGEST STUDENT AT PEAK CONDITION MIND YOU, by chapter 100. Yet, he uses it on nonsense like The Great Formless Divine Art which he KNOWS is the literal PEAK INHERITANCE of one of the NINE GREATS. He is going to die by using it, yet he focuses on it over his insanely other far more OP manuals. And the system. The system, ah. We have such great heart to heart moments with it, then it talks about killing the MC if he can’t complete a task. The author only obviously puts something like that in as pressure, but it completely ruins the story. It simply means the MC is forced to do what the system sets up, or he legitimately dies. He has no freedom to choose his future. It basically tells us EXACTLY how the story ends. He either dies - or the school reaches the Nine Greats. I also hate when the system compares him to past hosts. Just recently we had an inner system monologue that had the system say that the MC is in the top 5 of its past hosts. Sorry author, as readers, he will be the best. So why the h*ll would you write that? Like actually though? The system has potential in the way it shows emotions, yet that gets thrown out the window when it talks of killing the host. It’s a parasite. A massive potential ruined by cliché writing. A disappointment. P.S. WHY TF HASN’T THE MC SPENT 50k POINTS ON TIME EMBLEMS AND USED THEM ON THE DIVINE SIGHT? HE CAN SAVE ALL OF HIS STUDENTS IF HE CAN SEE THEIR TRUE CONDITIONS. PAPAYA GIRL IS A LITERAL GOD BUT THE SYSTEM RATES HER AT EXTEMELY LOW POTENTIAL BECAUSE YOU DON’T LEVEL ITTTTTT. P.P.S. Screw the potential ratings. They ruin the story. Lu Zhurou obviously has something special going on but is rated to be extremely low. It’s obvious, yet the system rates it as so. Jiang Chen is ruined by spirit runes and was rated Low. It’s something obviously fixable. Yet, his POTENTIAL is low. Stupid BS. I’M angry. Novel has such amazing potential.
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Novel synopsis is a lie and following on that the mc gets his counter to 100% reflect but keeps taking full damage and the author keeps changing or adding random nonsense that makes me think he is high while writing this overall not a great novel
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The synopsis and the initial chapters show some potential for a good book. It is a nice concept. I believe it wil be quite entertaining. However, work on some grammatical issues. Keep on working on your story.
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Love the story so far! Very exiting world building and character development!
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This is simply an amazing webnovel… I WANT MORE CHAPTERS!!!
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Based on the "Vampire Hunters" Universe by ZacAttackk
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P.S.  I just started plzz tell me if you like it and if i should make more.  Plzz don't hate.
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