Naruto: Yamigakure (Village Hidden in Darkness) - Reviews

hey every chinese novels contain faceslapping incidents, it shows that they didn't even believe their own fellow citizens and foreigners in the Chinese novels will have rational thinking.they are showing that their own country people are brainless idiots???.atleast other country citizens believe their own fellows somewhat, but in china according to their own novels I think nobody has rational thinking. brainless monkeys???. I am not saying these ,their own people are writing like this.DON'T PUT FACESLAPPING.DISGUSTING

no more words. thanks for the story!............................................................................................................................................................

Author pls keep writing and we readers hope to reach the end of the novel with you, pls keep in mind that there are still others anticipating for this novel and they just don't comment pretty much also,Thanks for your hardwork.d=(´▽｀)=b

Steady pace and great character developments and interaction. The world and realms are kinda confusing. But the tl kinda eased the reading experience.

You haven't given credit to its original source, you haven't put the proper tags up and you for some reason haven't given it the proper cover. You could have thousands of readers thanking you for spreading the masterpiece but you just put all your effort into uploading.However, it does bring a smile to my face that I can go and read my first ever Cultivation Novel. Thank you for the effort, keep it up.

Warning it's futani read at your own risk...................  .. . warning warning warning warning warning warning warning warning warning warning warning warning warning warning warning warning warning warning warning warning warning warning warning warning warning warning warning warning warning warning warning warning warning warning warning

Ok, here we go. This is my first novel but I am getting a little hang of it. English is my second language so there are probably grammatical mistakes. But I will try to upload chapters regularly. You can check out my patreon for more chapters.

*A man with piercing blue eyes, silky black hair, and a body of a sexy god. he looks serious, Aloof and very hard to please. Jake River was none other than the big CEO of River international Corps. one of the most riches families in New York City. Not only are they rich, their money goes way back during world war I.*

The word "unknown" seem magic

Nothing, absolute silence was what filled the alley. Kara just stared at Axel, mouth agape with her eyes widened in shock, surprise and a hint of disappointment. Surprise and shock obviously at whom she was talking to and what he knew, yet disappointment at the fact it was someone who she was hoping to form some type of relationship with him.

"Mu.....ah..." She adjusted her body condition so that she could accommodate all of him, whatever bitterness or grief, she was willing to accept the whole of him.

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