Naruto: Wood-Wood Fruit - Reviews

Face slapping, harem, and not a single person with an iq above the double digits. I dont recommend if you want to keep your sanity.           

**Brutal Mode** EngagedStarting a story is easy! Just drown the reader in so much info dumping and exposition that they can’t possibly escape! Once the reader is stuck, then trap them in a series of MC weak to strong building and ass-kicking of arrogant masters. They will never escape then and will be forced to read the rest of your story..Originality - 0/5 - It's a cultivation novel. No, wait! It's a System novel. Why not throw in naruto fanfic while you're at it? Oh LOL he was watching Naruto! Close enough. Wait Wait. Let me guess his cultivation system will be based on Dragon Ball? That will be the trifecta of Webnovel fads. Please ascend.Story - 2/5 There is a story. There is. This is not a paper on a system cultivator, is it? Am I reading one endless monologue? I am sure this story would be great if I could get past this wall of text hiding Mount Tai.Characters - 1/5 The characters speak to me. Literally. The MC rarely speak to someone else, unless its a cardboard cut out cliche. Parent, Grandpa. Quite literally named Grandpa trope so the author doesn't have to show anything about him to the reader #shortcut #efficientwriting. The reader will know from all the other copy and paste novels who use Grandpa. Teacher - angry and hates MC. Why? Who cares we need people in authority to be irredeemable illogical antagonists so the hero MC can make them look like fools in a few chapters.Flow - 5/5 The flow is excellent. I enjoyed reading this exposition. The Authors note explaining the yet to be introduced system was perfect. Why let the story show the system. Just tell the reader and yeah Authors note works perfectly. Btw When does the story start?

I can say....the first chapter is really hilarious and amazing! The Mc is a cussing machine and swears a lot! ??? When he called at customer service to complain, I suddenly remember my previous job that a customer swears a lot like Fu Jie ??? My stomach hurts from laughing! ??? Love this novel ??????

Is very addicting once you get into it. After a while I thought it would be better for him to be wrath incarnate instead of rage since the author added in the sins. All in all very good. Just one question? Will there be a second novel and if so when will you begin work on it?

Let’s talk about the book. It’s a great book, good story, plot, and everything you could possibly want. So if you’re still reading this then why aren’t you reading the book.

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La premisa es buena, pero la escritura es como un mtl, terrible, no se si es traduccion o es original, pero igual la escritura deja mucho que desear, si puedes soportar eso, la historia no esta mal. Lei hasta el cpaitulo 23, de momento no se sabe mucho del fondo mundial y ni si quiera se como se ve el mc, pero queda por ver mas adelante

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following his roar and the burning spirit of his crew, the ship accelerated as its engines roared loudly!

When I asked, Kurihara-san gave a strangely attractive expression and said that.

We reached the front gate and broke off to go to our own classrooms like always. Even though I act like a brat to Lila I really do like her and she knows that.. at least I hope she doses.

ထိုသူမ်ားကသာ က်န္းရႊမ္ကို ေဒါသထြက္ေအာင္ လာမစလွ်င္ က်န္းရႊမ္အေနျဖင့္ သူတို႔ ဘာလုပ္ေနေန ဂရုစိုက္စရာ အေၾကာင္းမရွိေပ။ ေကာင္းကင္ဘံုစာၾကည့္တိုက္သည္ လူမ်ား၏ အားနည္းခ်က္မ်ားအမွားမ်ားကို ေဖာ္ျပေပးႏိုင္သည္။ ထို႔ျပင္ သူတို႔ စိတ္ေနစိတ္ထား၊ အတိတ္မွလုပ္ေဆာင္ခဲ့မႈမ်ားသည္လည္း ပါရွိေလသည္။ သူထုတ္ေျပာခဲ့သည္မွာ စာအုပ္ထဲမွ အေၾကာင္းအရာအနည္းငယ္မွ်သာ ျဖစ္ေလသည္။က်န္းရႊမ္သည္ ေလာကႀကီးကို ကယ္တင္ရန္ ရည္ရြယ္ထားသူ မဟုတ္ေခ်။ ထို႔ေၾကာင့္ ခ်န္ေျပာင္းတို႔တသိုက္ လုပ္ခဲ့ေသာ အတိတ္က ကိစၥမ်ားသည္ သူႏွင့္မဆိုင္ေခ်။ ထိုသူမ်ားကသာ လာမေႏွာင့္ယွက္လွ်င္ သူကလည္း ထိုကိစၥမ်ားကို ထုတ္ေျပာလိမ့္မည္ မဟုတ္ပါ။ ေနာက္ေနာင္ ခ်န္ေျပာင္းတို႔ကသာ သူႏွင့္ ကင္းကင္းေနၿပီး သူ႕ကို မေႏွာင့္ယွက္လွ်င္ သူကလဲ မသိခ်င္ေယာင္ေဆာင္ေနေပးလိမ့္မည္ ျဖစ္သည္။ အကယ္လို႔ သူတို႔ကသာ က်န္းရႊမ္အား ေနာက္ေနာင္တြင္ ထပ္မံေႏွာင့္ယွက္ရဲေသးလွ်င္ ထိုသူတို႔အတြက္ အခြင့္အေရး ထပ္မံရလိမ့္မည္မဟုတ္ပဲ ေသလမ္းသာ က်န္ေပလိမ့္မည္။