Naruto: Winds and Changes - Reviews

read up to chaptor 21 which is the most updated chaptor right now. I can say I really like the plot, and the ideas that the author seems to try to be going with. with that said though, 4 chaptors of what I would call worthless back story is kinda a let down. I can see certain back stories in the future but 1 back story taking up 3 chaptors alone is a problem. that back story was not needed tbh. I just feel 3 chaptors were wasted on which could have been action or something else. chaptor 21 is also a start of another back story so we will get atleast 5 or 6 chaptors in a row of back story that is prolly wasted chaptors.  good thing is atleast I am not paying for it or I would be a unhappy camper.

The story has a lot of potential, but it is wasted in a easily evitable way.The most common problems are:- LOL.- The author explain as something work just to forget it and making it work in a different way.- Irrealistic or dumb plot device (alert minor spoiler, jump to the next point if you don’t want know: an explosion that erase 75 square km of the city where the mc is, but he says he doesn't know anything because he didn't watch the news and he was at a friend house, friend that previously he said was in the same city. To not add that even though the explosion happened in a residential district there were just 67 deaths).- Expression used in the wrong way.Although I may sound harsh (both here and in the comments) I don't want to offend the author, but just point out thing that in a much needed rewrite should be corrected.As said before the novel has a lot of potential and it sadden and annoy me to see it wasted.I hope to not have offended or upset the author with this review or my other comments.

Realms 0th body refinement 1st qi blood 2nd innate master3rd tongxuan grandmaster4th divine intent realm  ch3525th divine origin6th divine skill7th physiognomy  condensation law8th Void Breaking heavy king9th domain heavenly Immortal 10th Dao establishment heavenly union11th Creation Divine Venerate Realm12th Primortdail Supreme sovereign 13th Dao Patch Domain master

A lectura es muy buena y con estas historias somos mejores lectores no importa de que trate siempre sera bueno leer para poder hacer mejor la historia devemos ser mas Lectores felicitaciones a los escritores ????????

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First of all, you have talent to be a great author. I like how the story progresses, world building characters and such. What i dont like about this novel is that there is just too much angst. I just cant continue reading this. I suffer while reading this. Whats the point of reading novel if i get sad again and again?Glad that there is no ntr or getting cucked. Could be worse i guess

This needs an editor. The constant POV switches make it hard to follow the story. Also, the MC feels a bit fake, idk, maybe I should just give this more time.

It ’s been 30 to 50 chapters that the Mc staying in the same tower waiting for the meeting to plan their next step it’s becoming boring      

"The lord is wise" said that figure.

The loud sound of the slap thundered in the ears of the Geodude as his eyes got wide opened. He looked at the Monkey who just did something to him and his eyes got redder and redder. His slowly started to breathe heavier and heavier as the whole world started to go quieter and quieter for him.

"Excus-" Reno paused as his arm directly phased through the man. 'That's right. I'm already dead. It wouldn't make sense if I could still interact with the living. They can just walk though me without even noticing.' As if on cue, the street vendor stood up and walked in Reno's direction. The man then faced the street vendor across from him as their lips opened and closed as if conversing. 'Ah. That's right the village had also been strangely quiet up until now. If its a holiday then there should be plenty of children and their families having a good time. Yet I didn't hear anything.' Although he couldn't hear, by reading the two men's lips he could still approximately make out some things. Specifically, the word bell. 'Bell? Bells are usually rung in sacred celebrations but this celebration seems a bit casual. Could there be danger?' Suddenly, the men who were talking started moving while slowly picked up pace forcing Reno out of his speculation as he strained to follow them. As he chased after them, he could see the clear signs of anxiety and fear on their faces. His heart sinking he  had a bad premonition of what was to come.

Aku mencoba menyerangnya secara beruntun dari kiri, kanan, atas serta tusukan dari depan. Semua itu aku lakukan secara membabi buta namun dengan tempo yang semakin intens.