Naruto: White Moonlight - Reviews

It's a really good novel, one that keeps me asking for more and more. This should be way more popular then it is now. Any1 thinking of reading this just go right in, you won't be disappointed

This is the perfect Slice Of Life.There are some dumb people who think the novel has to be done everything new. But Slice Of Life is cliches placed together. And the Author write the novel in a way that make these cliches look awesome!If you are looking for something with a slow pace and amazing characters, this is the novel for you!The characters have profundity and resemble anime characters.There are no FaceSlapping or Nationalism.So don’t worry about reading these boring stuff.

This is a really good story with good build up so far. Really looking forward to more chapters.                                                  

"THANKS FOR THE CHAPTER" SECT IS HERE TO SAY: Thanks for the chapter!

Defesa: 15

"Please teacher we want to become friends with Irina-chan and show her around" the girls once again asked with a pleading tone.

Big Maggot God ignored him. "Is there nothing you'll trade?" he asked the witch.

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this is really good read. the phase and writing style is easy to digest. recommend ?

Overall I enjoyed the story and felt it was worth spending the time reading.  I feel that this is an author who has potential and look forward to future works from them.  At times, the writing is awkward, and there are sections, especially early in the story, that feel out of place.  Some events feel like they are forced and either dont belong or should have flowed differently.  The reactions and feelings that several characters have feel wrong for what is going on, like they are dismissing of the events.World-building is definitely not a focus in this story, but there was enough there to understand what was going on and why they were happening.