A very interesting story. The MC is smart and cautious. Doesn't take shit from anyone but also knows when open outbursts will be damaging to him. The grind is also real and it is really fun to read since every day we can see him grow at least a little bit. It is defenitly a novel which is worth your time. Hope it gets picked!
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The book is great with regards to the world's backstory and the ongoing character development. It's just that it's so hard to read with a lot of grammatical errors. I suggest the author to get a beta reader or an editor in the side
I have a feeling about something that is being hinted in the novel but I don't want to spoil, if are here to read reviews so you can start the novel... well my review is that the novel is perfect for a first time author.
Omg omg omg..... this novel finally updated!!!!!! Eeeee!!!!!!! You have no idea how happy I am that my favorite novel is updating again! (or maybe you do know...hehe)
Without warning, Asami's hand came down hard. Akihito yelped and tried to hold back tears. He panted hard and shook for a while. Asami didn't continue and Akihito wondered why until he remembered what he was supposed to do.
Powerman stood with his back facing Colleen and Iron Fist said "Sweet Christmas!" as he grab one of the ninjas that attacked him and swung him around like a club.
