My roommate's always flirting with me - Reviews

One of the amazing books Muse wrote!

Interesting world, poor character personality, also the way the author introduce things can be unnecesary confusing and leaving plot holes all over the story, translator made quite a few mistakes with repeated sentences in some chapters and other mistakes, maybe because he releases so many chapters...  plot holes, the plot armor (I can stand plot armor but this is abusive/ridiculus), poor character development.. I understand that the story can get insteresting but people gives 4 or 5 star reviews out of nothing.

A lot of errors in this novel, not sure if it’s an issue with the translator or the original author but regardless there are a ton of inconsistencies when it comes to the character attributes obtained or the combat power level. Plenty of other errors as well. Sure you ca. figure out what’s going on but it makes it much less enjoyable to read.

This is one of the best novels I have read yet. Heart warming and humble. But please give credits to the actual translator of the novel. ChubbyCheeks from woopread translated this.

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This ls actually good novel good story and good character development all of it, definitely recommend this novel and as a newbie creating a novel might as well use this too see and improve on how to write and do things when writing novel.

Firstly I liked the story. The narration was on point and the surrounding of the character were very well described. I felt satisfied with reading it.

This novel is solid. If you want a solid novel you’ve found it. The glaring issue is two things the pace which is moving fast, that’s okay for now, but the chapter length is too short. It’s 1/3 the length of a regular chapter so keep that in mind.

Hi there,I’m the author of this novel, and I’d love to hear your thoughts so far.Thank you for reading!

Good luck to the author with this story.

In a room, a man can be seen lying in the bed       with his mouth opened for a long time. in his hands, a pencil was hold tightly by him.

Again I am NOT droping this just working on my outline. I can't decided what to write for the next chapter. I am going to do an outline for maybe the next few arcs probably a lot of chapters each.