Ever since the system got upgraded it became basically repeated breakthrough the story barely progress its not even telling what the other heroine doing in stimulation anymore like before
Good one and highly recommended. The characters and story are awesome and going to read it with the release of each chapter because it is this interesting. Good Luck, author.
I'd like to remind that this is entirely my own opinion and only based upon everything up to chapter 18. (Because there wasn't more published yet.)Writing Quality:Recogniseable the writing of an expirienced author. Story Development:This is a very Action driven Story, fast paced but comftable enough in speed to not get to quickly exhausted. Character Design:An opportunistic Demon with revenge Fantasies towards the gods that wronged him. I am curious how he might change throughout the Story. Update stability:What's to say? The writer does still write, so good. I guess...World Background:The World grows gradually with the Maincharacters own reach. Starting small as a snail only to grow with him. Summary:Cute apex preditor snail is cute.
The story is good, the depiction of the characters is also unique. This story must continue.Don't give up, keep working until the story gets more interesting.
hi guys this is shameless review from author, please help to review, whether is good or bad, I write this story with my heart, and sometimes tears, is too good for me, I hope you guys like it, love ?????
"Now, now, Mr.Yang. I don't like how you used psychology around my comrade. Thus, as his superior, I need to give justice for my lovely junior," said Sun Yun Zhang darkly as his fingers lightly tapped on the table.