My Soul Skills Made Tang San Cry - Reviews

Wow.... I’m in love with the book

A great fanfic. It's very hard to find good fanfic and good writing style. But, author is one of the rare kind. He is already jonin level writer. Hopefully we will see a lot of chapters on this story.

hope no romance or harem in this....................................................................................................................

hands down one of the most ridiculous novels I've read, but I'm all here for it! keep it up king

Very interesting work so far. I believe that if the author keeps the updates as promised, this work will be very successful. However, I hope the author doesn't put common things like harem or romance (despite being with the target) ,  seeing the abundance in other works, making it a bit cloying to read.

Good so far.Mc had second chance so he back in timeline before apo.And of course it will strong and cunning mc.I just hope you can add some romance, but not too much.

Story had a lot of promise and i enjoyed reading it. Unfortunately it looks like the author has dropped it. There have been no updates here or on his patreon for a while now.

Read up to chapter 50, doing a review now because not sure if I'm going to continue or not. The first 10 chapters I thought were doing well was kind of unique and interesting. But after the Mc ended up in the progenitor body story up to this point has just been kinda boring. Mc is very impulsive and niave but with his age and inexperienced it's a classic trope when novels start with a young normal Mc. Think the main reason I'm not really into the story has to do with the focus now being on setting up the introduction to the characters of the story and a bit of plot development but so far there hasn't been any real moments with the characters that's made me interested or care about them. Guess it's kinda my fault I did come into this expecting more of a b*d*ss Mc due to seeing him being a vampire progenitor in the description. Also not sure if something like Google translate is being used to translate the story or just simple mistakes but there is issues with the writing with he and she being mixed up often and other details. If the novel does end up to your liking one thing is commendable to point out is the author is releasing chapters at a rate you don't see with many novels so you'll have something to read each day.

Jennifer held out all ten fingers and gently touched Melissa's head.

If you are someone who expects a description of all the food being cooked by the chef on a cooking novel, then this one is not for you.. But I personally like this novel as the MC uses his own personal skill and there is no system whatsoever that guides the chef like most of the cooking novels I read.. And he also exhibits other skills aside from cooking which makes this a fresh experience for me.. I have so far enjoyed the eccentric acts of the MC and the people around him.. A real good read for me..

Gabriella's father calls her down for breakfast as she gets down the stairs, she saw her father infront of her with a paper crown on his head and a cake with candles on it in his hands and next to him her 5 year older sister with a crown on top of her head and a smile on her face,the smell of breakfast hit her nose as they started to sing , "happy birthday to you".she blushed and ran to the kitchen and stopped at the entrance she turned and looked around the house she asked politely "where's mother?" with a puzzled and confused look on her face. "she went to the gathering at the Niyt castle my daughter, we never told you this but Queen Cleo was your mother's sister, no one but us and the Niyt twins parents knew this. Your mother is going to go and tell all the tribes this after Daruis and Cletus have adressed the death of the queen.

Lin Dong had seen this situation happen often back in his old world. But now that he had both Planetary Essense and Qi he wouldn't be able to be stopped on this planet later. The Ji Realm supplied him a constant supply of Qi but it needed to be processed by a Cultivation Technique, and he decided to use the Divine Void Cultivation Technique again. He knew he died last time due to it but he felt it was different this time, but he also wanted to combine the Planetary Essence into his cultivation as it was important. Back in the old world, there were only Weapon Essences and only certain bloodlines or special bodies could access Elemental Essences. But in this world, everyone technically had a special body with the weapon spirits but had no access Qi, so the planet instead produced Planetary Essence for the creatures of the earth to grow stronger.