My Maid - Reviews

love to read it but not spending 21 coins to read one page

absolutely love the concept been waiting for something like this,purple flying elephant purple flying elephant purple flying elephant purple flying elephant

It is a good story and I enjoyed the pacing so far would recommend adding in “” around people speaking but it’ goods

Really good story, surprised how I read it so quickly. The whole story is pretty smooth in terms of pacing and dialogue. I'm not sure I like the sound of this council that showed up in chapter 200 ish. I came for OPness but it sounds like there are plenty more similar people. Hopefully he gets a power up in his soul usage then.

This book is one of the only great flash fanfics on this website. If your looking for great character development and regular updates this is a fanfic for you

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"So does close the de--" Zack didn't finish his word when someone open the metal door loudly open it.

He stood up from his sit and reached out his hand to me. I gingerly took it. It's big and rough, I certainly feel the difference between a man's hands from a woman's.

" Leave "

Yuse was still hovering in the air. His hand clutching mysteriously at nothing.

"I want to go too, this time!" chimed Dudley excitedly.

All that glitters is gold