My Betrothed Mate - Reviews

the story is complete hot trash you make it go to fast your grammar is trash but you can get better i know you might not like how i'm saying this but how you made it was trash but if you start taking it slow let us see how he grew how they'r relation ships moved it would be way better than those anti hero storys

Well if you come this far atleast read 1 or 2 ch. ?  . ..     ...   .. .. ..  .. ..     .  .... .. .. .  . . . .. . . .    .....    ..  ...     . ..

man just dont copy try 2 add ur own **** *tell me if i am right , it has versatile mage , that gene one.. , then that goldfinger one.. one piece.. etc. *as im not regular reader, though i think i got some of those mashup novel right.. but still a good way to remember those novel... *hope u dont stop it...

Really an amazing story. Its what you expect of a reencarnation/videogame novel but it has its unique strong points. For starters, his actions do not change the history of the game(yet, they probably will), but it is the AI he programmed that fills the gaps and makes the world different from ehat he programmed. Characters so far are solid and the world, as far as we've seen, is well thought and built. MC is real funny sometimes, which affs to his charm. Author is not a native english speaker, so he sometimes makes grammar or spelling mistakes, but it is nothing too obvious and I dare say his writing quality and syntax is better than most english speakers. As for updates stability, he is commited and usually updates once a day, but he sometimes takes breaks that are a bit too long. Anyway, overall I would give a 4.5, but since I like this story so much I decided on five. Really a good read. Highly recommended.

this one of the best novel for sports genre even if it's translated because it's just too good , man keep going ???

"[Aren't you looking down on me too much by thinking id just stand here and do nothing while you attack? You big stupid monster!]" – Izuku

Rhett replied with some disappointment on his face:

"Listen here you overgrown brat..." started the boy. "When I said, 'tell me why you're here'...I expected you to tell me who sent you try and kill me and why, not a lesson in the origin of soul halves and this world first true era..." Said the boy with grey hair as calmly as he could while ticks began appearing on the forehead of his most stoic of faces.

When he finished the Appule guys subordinates joined in with his laughter. In the middle of the night only laughter was heard, when Cooler saw this his patience slowly began to run out, "No you misinterpreted my words, I meant get your filthy looking b*tch ass bodies from my sight or else I will massacre you in cold blood, with your bloody life in my bloody hands!!"

The pill was called 'The Enhancing Mutant Pill'. It had completely changed the Tuffles, they became so powerful that even their rivals, the Saiyans couldn't beat them anymore. Unfortunately they had to make the naive choice of attacking the Saiyans directly.

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Old grandpa:" Hmmm.... Well you are a weird one indeed not only are you not freaking out at your death or getting angry at me for killing you. And when given a chance to have any thing you could think of you wished for your families heath and happiness. May I ask Why?"