Moons' Shadow - Reviews

I deter harem the most, because it's what that drags down the novel itself. Most stories with a harem will turn out to be ribbish, regardless of how good the concept of the story is. Also, it's usually very cliche and irritating, making readers annoyed.

Personagens como esse MC são horríveis, eles não têm personalidade, apenas sabem agir como robôs sem emoções.Totally boring apart from the fact that all humans are weak or stupid. That were just to fill the scene

Never reviewed before but there were just some glaring issues. It’s an interesting story with potential and a fun read, but the amount of plot holes is jarring. Many times in the story the author talks about powerful beings not being able to interfere in the games, yet the games and specifically Elliot get interfered with constantly from outside sources and nothing is done about it by the games commission. While the power system and beast taming aspects are pretty cool, the author just rushes through some parts of the story and does not fully think about how certain events affect the story. The constant interference was just the main issue I had with the story, there are others but they are much less impactful. The story’s got potential, and if the author can fix some of these issues they may have a real gem in this story.

Read a couple chapters before realising the mc is bisexual so i stop reading it, but it seemed pretty good it just wasn't made for me. Check it out if thats your thing

"We don't have much time; both of you already know the situation, so we'll be moving on to the solutions we can make." Isabelle said without beating around the bush and getting straight to the point.

After feeling nothing even after several tries, my eyes fling wide open in fear because I almost never not leave my phone by my side when I sleep because when I wake up, the first thing I do is to check my email.

Rogue let out several eager grunts, wanting the two children to return the ball. The boy took a few breaths; exhausted from running all over the clearing they were currently cavorting in.

Shit shit shit… he just killed him. why did Big Jay have to ask him that not only does this guy looks scary his voice is scary as hell to what pit of hell did this guy come from.

"Who can know exactly the kind of corruption that the bite of such creatures can transmit? The best thing is to make sure. You should use all the healing spells and prayers you know to prevent the disease." I said in a solemn tone  to Tarnorie in order to refute the ranger.

Yeah, this was actually my last saved chapter. I just uploaded it so I could get the notice out lol, Don't wanna be that author that magically disappears one day, only to post a hiatus chapter when he comes back.

Thank you for the lesson, Oumad!

Lu Xian Yu laughed lightly. He wasn't expecting the woman on the phone to be so direct. He liked and preferred straightforward women than those women who would act so shy around him when the lust in their eyes was so obvious. He would usually make the first move for them and it was quite boring for him. "Hm, I'll ask you out if you give me your name, sweetheart."