Moon to My Earth Part 2 - Reviews

It sucks that this book isnt putting out anymore chapters!! I really liked this book!!

This story plus your imagination                                                                                                                                      

If you're comfortable with reading a novel in a different genre rather than the assigned genre, go for it. Consider it as a comedy for the beginning few chapters and a test for your patience.I do appreciate the author's motivation and his desire to try a new way of presenting things in his novel.I hope author will improve the content and the character design along with world background as we progress further and turns into a good novel.?

come on this is a good book, for me it's way better than "Pocket Hunting Dimension

Reminds me of Blood Warlock: Succubus partner in the apocalypse. I'm not sure if this is good or not, since i didn't care for the whole partner dynamic all that much, and in this novel's case, there are two headache inducing elves... oh boy. Also, things are escalating far too much in this novel, the monsters that showed up right on the first day are so ridiculously strong i'm surprised the entire human population didn't get wiped out right away. anyway, the novel up till chapter 40 seems pretty average, i wasn't at all excited about the mc's weapon reinforcing skill since every weapon he uses it on breaks in one hit. that's just annoying. aight that's my take on it, peace

This book can be summed up in two words: wasted potential. You can feel that the author has a feel for the world he created and its background, but the info dump makes the story unreadable. Instead of discovering the world at the same time as the main character, we get random chapters of info dump about something completely unrelated. Even action scenes full of tension are simply cut to make place for an explanation of the background of a random dead race or character that you won’t give a f about in a couple chapters. Yeah, so I tried to keep going and to hope that the info dump would stop at some point to focus on the story, but it hasn’t. So try it out if you don’t mind a slow paced story that doesnt follow a linear pespective.

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immoral novel, if have bottomline don't read it.

typical story development, everyone is trying to become enemy of MC,just to admit into an institution you have to kill others which seems like evil way but portrayed as righteous and etc etc... I got bored and I am dropping it

This really is an excellent novel. I always look forward to the release of new chapters. Updates are a little slow in coming because this is just one of many works by this author. Author would recommend reading some of their other works as well but I'm just too invested in this novel and don't want to get my plots, or characters, mixed up. One star off in quality because sentence structure can be a bit confusing at times. I will, however, defend the quality of this book and author with my last breath the same as I would my other 2 authors, and the works of theirs, that I read.

The pace is so slow that it quickly become extremely boring, I dropped after 8 chapters of them talking and descriptions, there was 1 fight and the point of that fight was just to make tje characters TALK EVEN MORE

Good start to an interesting idea, and it’s good up to about 3/4 of the story, then it goes downhill unfortunately. A genetically engineered soldier from a technological culture crashes on a magical world. Isekai scenario. He uses his advanced technology to defeat the various magic things, and the magic system gets a pretty good explanation. He then proceeds to hack the magical system, although that isnt developed as much as it could be. So far so good, but then the story progresses and I won’t spoil it for you, but the main problem is that the remaining 1/3 of the book feels rushed and ideas are not developed but instead just happen at a breakneck pace. My biggest issue though is that the ending is a real bummer, which is a logical way to end the story, but again feels rushed and doesnt do the story or character any justice. What a disappointing end to a good start.