Monsters Within: Legendary Dragon's Heart(HIATUS) - Reviews

I read until chapter 59 and its toooooooooooooooooo much inner monologue, tooooo much explanation...i mean even in the middle of conversetion you explain things tooo much which is annoying...most of the readers already read many novel and know the concept so no need to explain things toooo much...i hope you can consider this comment and improve,,,this is just my humble opinion...???Sorry for my bad english

The system in space is great. blasters and lasers, elves and cats. nice set of all sorts of tricks.                                          

Well, World development is nowhere i mean he describes his surroundings quite well but the world itself hasnt been described much. not that it matters to much anyway its quite good if you ask me great writing and well he a stone no villages or citys to speak of yet. Anyway definitely enjoyable to read the characters is great I enjoy it and the character is actually intelligent. He uses his average intelligence rather than just being an idiot. ?

Quality-wise: The novel actually has a lot of punctuational and descriptional errors, therefore, I rated 3 stars. I suggest that the author uses Grammarly, It will improve the overall writing quality of the novel.Story: The story is still confusing with only 3 chapters out. Therefore it's still too early to judge whether it's good or bad so I rated it 3 stars. Neither too high or too low.Character Design: The characters are fleshed out at the start. We know some of Sia and Sid's (Main Characters I think?) traits so I gave 4 stars World Building: As for this we somehow know that Sia (MC) traveled to the future from an accident. Apparently, there are colonies and space travels in this story, so it is a definite outer space and sci-fi novel. However, again the novel only has few chapters out so it's really difficult to rate this right now so I just balanced it out to 3 stars. I'll revise my review in the future depending on the progress of the novel.

Amazing storylineOutstanding character design

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civorus was full of anger.... he raised his both arms and screamed... the whole castle was shaking by his powerful scream.....

It was quite clear that the Prince wasn't taking his time to make sure he knew his enemy. He was going to have his victory so easily. In her mind there were equations repetitively going through selected movements and possible attack patterns. What could be the best option for her?

"Can't one of the reservists take the case?"

Hay'z si mom talaga hilig gamitin ang powers kapag gigisingin ako??

Currently Jesseca's suspect is being arrasted, Jesseca can be entangled in the Constitution 5491 paragraph 2 which contains' Whoever makes other people toxid will be suffer.

Everytime i saw Raiden Ei Covers, I'll immediately add it to Library ?