Monster Chef Shun - Reviews

so i wrote this review to get free pass and i need to write 140 characters so im gonna make this long and im so close i have nothing to talk about

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This **** is trash Mc wanna hide his personality when The previous Mc already forgot his memory everyone knows this whats the point in hiding it an then you got him hiding that he could do magic for no reason at all an then another turn off is wanting to make a portal to bring men to that world so dumb such a beta MC thats retarded so dumb most the time its just complaints about dumb stuff how to satisfy the world of woman like who cares you just woke up an now wanna take the frustrations of all woman  pullin a naruto GARBAGE

Very good start. Needs more showbiz novels with less overt racism please. Hope this gets picked up soon. Wonder what's next for him.      

The story idea of needing of using a pay-to-play system is interesting. Unfortunately most of the sayings and catchphrases use so much of a specific cultures idioms that the translation is garbled on actions, thoughts and descriptions of various things. The mc is so obnoxious that it's hard to find him interesting. With a some solid assistance and some rewriting in other areas it would become a more passable read.

The story started off amazing with great characters and storyline up until the "4 years later" part. After this it felt a little like the writer wanted to end the story quickly or didn't know what else to write. There are quite a few spelling errors but you can still read it easily.

This novel is trash like its stupid MC. If you don’t want to let your brain cell die then dont read this. I gave 5 star because author delete low star actual review of the novel.

Let me be honest here.+ MC can solve anything ✅+ MC ruthless-  No one question MC can solve mystery -  Crown Princes DUMB level 9999Story development is good but character very bad. I dont know wht to say anymore. K bye

Author AK here, 5 stars for self-promoting. If you want a slow-paced novel with a fantasy setting, this one will pique your interest. The first two volumes are mostly about MC's adventure, but the plot will thicken during the third volume. Also, pay attention to the strange incidents in this novel. Hmm, that's it. MC won't be too smart, but not too dumb. He will be more like an average guy. tt ❤️ ❤️ ❤️Anbe Sivam (Love is God)❤️ ❤️ ❤️

Not a comprehensive review;I just wanted to show the author some appreciaion for what I thought was an excellent story.Qual:Pretty good. The story flows well enough that I did not notice any errors.Updates:Nothing to complain about since I only just saw this story a few hours ago.Dev`p:Pretty good and out of the norm. Got annoyed at the idea of tourneys but this was almost immediately discarded.The tourney in this instance was actually pretty sensible. The School War itself was somewhat irrational - given there is a Vampire-led autocracy on the outside that would imply the Mages need to unite. Plus, the class divide is such that it is a recipe for trouble later on since the disenfranchised will always seek an outlet if they are ignnored too long. I would harzard that the ruling Mage class of those with bloodlines are far stronger than the Vampires and their human minions since the 2 vampires could not take down a single advanced Mage. Plus, the indications of the existence of truly destruction spells like that 'troublemaker' spell seems to imply that such internal divisions among the Mages makes sense in some way since they are in an unassailable position.Char:Pretty ok. I am not comfy with some of the decisions he has adopted,but this is a difficult one to manage.World: Like story dev`p, this is well advanced. We did not see much of the other world they share but the little we did see makes good sense. The Magic world and rules are well thought out and managed.Cough cough...ot good giving out 5 stars...people get big heads you know...would have applied it to the updates section but that would have been unfair...ok, will review this once more a few weeks down the lines...should have something to nit-pick on if only about the number of new chapters!

Disagree with amaturewriter.  If you wish and skill, you can think up and do a lot here.  There is a fanfic of the strongest Quirkless and it is incredibly good, although gg has zenkai boost.  I hope that the author will be able to correctly realize his idea.  For the first chapters, so far everything is more orderly.

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