Mommy, Please Give Daddy a Second Chance - Reviews

The technical issues with chapters 91-95 have been corrected.

Really good story!!!  Loved it all!!!  Thank you!

The surgery went well. Now, I have a long recovery but I will be writing so you will see regular updates here. Thank you for your patience and understanding. Note: Yes, the hand no longer hurts & I still have 10 fingers.

I really enjoyed this story! Love your work, author.

Dear Readers: As of Jan 25/2024 I will be recovering from hand surgery. I promise to return to writing the 2nd or 3rd week of Feb. I apologize for interrupting your reading like this.

19 chapters 9/30/23

I like this book so far, but is there something wrong with chapter 91-95??

I am currently coming out of the average Chinese novels. I am looking for novels that are a little more explicit so to speak, but this novel is intolerable for my taste. I'm not saying that the perverted part of the novel should be removed, but that these things should be placed in specific situations and not show such a level of degeneracy at all times.

**No spoilers**

Important part first, if you can get passed the rough outline of the ending it really is a good book and is still worth a read.

Love the story and the concept, could tell he really had a good idea of where he wanted to go with it and enjoyed writing it. My only gripe is the ending, you can tell that he ran out of juice and it didnt seem like he was enjoying the process anymore. I really hope he comes back and rewites the ending at some point. The beauty of a web novel is it can awlays be changed and updated.

The ending clearly shows how he wanted it to end it, and it has a solid structure. But it does feel like it was rushed a bit. That being said it really just needs a polish. I plan on rereading it again, and I really do hope that someday he revisits this book to give it the ending it deserves.

I don't know if I've ever seen a properly translated Japanese web/light novel. I don't understand this situation.

the novel is great .. but the translation ruined it around chapter 200 or something

I think it was the Japanese novel called "The World of Otome game is tough for mobs" it pretty much have a similar plot at the start.