Mistress of The Finance King - Reviews

I love the book so much. God! the characters are beautiful, the dialogue goes smoothly and I didn't witness any error. Good book dear!

Not that good. I picked it up because there were not many chapters and the reviews were good but I don't really liked the novel.Let's start from beginning,It is the story of Xu Ning, a guy with no backstory who transmigrates into the body of another Xu Ning with a broken and boring cheat.I will be dividing this novel into 2 parts the Mortal Arc which would be about first 200 chapters, and the Dao Realm Arc. The Mortal Arc is great, you have challanges ups and downs, meaningful relationships, family, friendship, clever fights, and more.The Dao Realm Arc however, gives you no challenges, MC will always level up before any difficulty, side character are thrown away once they are not needed, the pace of story increases rapidly, MC is having a breakthrough every 20 or less chapters, fights are basically MC overwhelming others with his superior strength. Let me give you an example of how bad the Dao Realm Arc gets, the only combat technique he learns throughout the Dao Realm is "Void Walk Beast Phantom" and it wasn't used for more that 5 chapters, all the previous technique before the Dao Realm are not used in Dao Realm.About the Ending,Ending sucks. The Final Boss guy has no stakes with the MC. Just a bad guy who wants to kill everyone for a petty reason and MC took up the duty to stop him. Also, the ending arc is incredibly rushed, the whole Dao Arc is greatly rushed but the ending takes the cake. When I finished it, I was already fed up with the whole story being rushed that I only sighed in relief for the novel finally ending.MC and his cheat,Plain MC. Good aligned. Not smart, the only time he is shown smart is by making the other character become dumb. His cheat allows him to absorb energy from any Marital Art resource like a herb or a pill, and once he has enough energy he can perfectly level up to the peak of the next level of Cultivation. He never puts any effort into Cultivation. And since he perfectly levels up to the peak of Cultivation, he is also always strongest in his current realm.Cultivation System,Cultivation System is not particularly unique, but quite descriptive. Seems like Author put a lot of thought into describing each stage and the process of Cultivation. But it doesn't mean much when MC's cheat straight up ignores every picularity of the Cultivation Realm and just levels up to the peak of the next realm. The final Cultivation realm had a unique idea, it's basically mastering the Origin of the World and then travelling to other world to master their Cultivation System and their unique Origin, but that also wasn't explored much because of the rushed ending.Overall,This novel was a Disappointment. It's a cliche novel with nothing unique to it. And it looks like Author was trying to end it after the first half, the novel after the first 50% is incredibly rushed.

SPOILERS BELOW!!!!!!!    Well I enjoy the premise of the story and I quite like Samuel as a character. However I feel it would have been better for him to wait awhile to atleast settle down and actually enjoy having a “father”&”mother” etc. In the first 30 chapters alone he’s gone from being blind to adopted to straight publishing a book now talking about starting a company, it feels very rushed especially considering he’s only been adopted for 1-3months (inc mini timeskip’s) that’s also not considering the fact he’s 10 years old. Well just thought I’d give my opinion i enjoyed what I have read so far.

you took the first few chapters from another book and then ruined it after chapter 9, first you changed the character of the protagonist, then you made him a virgin again. you ruined the whole thing.

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Its pretty good and has a little potentialIm not really sure what to say about it but the creativity is decently so I hope you can continue

Despite the fact that English is not the native language of the author, the novel is easily understandable, well written and quite fun! Start is a little slow but the characters are very interesting and the MC is relatable. Props to this author!

Pretty good concept, the grammar is proper as well. I like the dialogues and lines used in different places- Look forward to what happens next. Best of luckk!

Sooo this one has been on my recommendation list for a long time. I was bored reading cultivation novel, and this one has a female lead with a touch of romance so it piqued my curiosity. Let me review it so far (chapter 102):Translation quality is...well, I guess acceptable, with mistakes here and there. Actually I'm not a native english myself, so I don't usually naggy about grammatical mistake as long as it isn't too horrendous and I get the overall meaning. But the mistakes I found make me dizzy. At some point the translation said "she" and sudeenly turned to "he" when referring to same person. What the hell? So did she get found out cross dressing or not? And worse, it got repeated over and over again. I gave up trying to understand.As for updating stability, I'm not really sure cuz I just joined the ride and binge read this at once. Hope it's following the promised released rate, as to give a reason why the quality is at times barely acceptabe,or else I might feel really disappointed.Story development is not really good. The pace is jumping from quick to sloow as hell and then take a sudden thrust, then it slowed again just to accelerate. Some events got a really detailed explanation, some just mentioned on passing, few sweeped out, and even there's some event I couldn't fugure out what the **** exactly happened. Really, the element of surprise is so strong in this one.Character design is not so bad, but not good either. The male lead makes me curious and hidden in mystery (as far as I read). Actually that was the main reason I insist to continue reading. The female lead transformation is too steep, and her skill as assassin is too damn high. The worst thing about her is I dont have a clue about her previous life's world. Was she an esper? What the heck with that over 9000 teleport ability? So fucking no clue!As for other characters, they seemed bland. And idiot. And too gullible. And inconsistent. ?Her father is...weird. He acted not caring at beginning, and suddenly turned into pampering caring daddy for some reason I cannot accept. Too. Damn. Fast. Female lead is awesome at transforming people around her.The antagonists are too wicked, brainless, cocky, and other usual troves you found in antagonistics character of soap operas. They shows their ugly sides plainly, no smart scheming, no fun or interesting twist, just plainly wicked. Hope this one getting better in later chapters.As I said before, world background is mystery. Not much explanation about her current world (besides kingdom and clan stuffs, others only mentioned in short passing), or the previous one. Really, when you said a modern human world, my imagination assumed that it was our current world on Earth. Maybe a little bit in future, but not a world with espers, or exorcist, or other superpower beings. Just couldn't imagine this right. Maybe mine is too bland, or too realistic to say.A bit over 100 chapters and the world explained are only the basics one, her family, her kingdom, a bit of clans, a very slight information about male lead.But you know what grind my gears the most? Its the FUCKING FOOT NOTES THAT PLAINLY SPILL THE SPOILERS OH MY GAWDD!! Dear translator, please don't do things outside your job of translating the story. To sum it up, I probably will stop for now. I'm too stupified with the development that turned so sharp and made it more unacceptable. Hoping some news that this story got better by other diligent readers. I'll just put this on the side to collect some dust and new chapters. See you then.

"It's the first I've seen him do it," auntie said, "but I wouldn't count it as the last. We will be sure to rebuild it for you first thing in the morning."

He tried to find the person that leaves the document through CCTV, but unfortunately, someone bugged the CCTV, making he or her trace disappeared.

"Wae? Kau bilang kau menyayanginya, apa kau mau meninggalkannya begitu saja?"