Meitantei x Furyou x Riajyu x Chijo x Kettousha - Reviews

Nicely done! It is a captivating story that pulls you in and refuses to let you go. Can't wait to see what happens next!

Raw Name: 顶级气运，悄悄修炼千年Status: 390(Ongoing)It has 200,000 collections, quite popular in Qidian China.                                                  

It’s okay but the story is kind of scrambled Buuuuuuuuttt the theme is like animeAs for the characters it could use more information on the villain and the plot picks up in The second volume but it’s okay

?Don't dare stop writing.I need two chaps per day

its aight but the writing quality is trash      .     ..    cc.     .   . .  . .      .    ..   .. .

Failed implies this mc has failed at becoming a villain, but seems like our poor mc needs to fake his way through on orders by a mysterious goddess after a super villain kills him. Still interesting concept here willing to stick around.

Meanwhile, Imai Uka was hidden near a bush. She was giggling as she watched the young boy search for others but was not able to find anyone. She thought that the boy was an idiot because he was still not able to find anyone. Then suddenly something flashed by her eyes which blinded her for a moment. She then turned around to look and noticed a shining pearl which was so beautiful that she was mesmerized by it. She reached out towards the pearl and grabbed it. When she was about to see the pearl which she grabbed, a hand reached out and touched her shoulder.

Yes i will be getting some ideas from "UnOrdinary" go check it out in webtoon it is really great you will not regret it i promise you.

If only I can hear the sound of the ocean breeze….

"Okay. Should I gather up the other teachers and school staff?" The woman asked, still holding the clipboard in her hands.

What really caught my eye first was the title, then the synopsis and the first few chapters.From disappointment to slowly getting herself together I have to admit I like where this is going already. Keep it up!I will be waiting for more.

Chapter 1 is so disconnected and disjointed from the rest of the chapters.I can't figure out the anything after chapter 1 so maybe create a natural flow ?