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The story is initially intriguing, and no flaws were particularly obvious for at least 50 chapters or so. After that... well maybe the author had a sufficient following and got careless?There are a number of instances that are tiresome but bearable; the almost obligatory "China #1" plugs, frequent contradictions in his descriptions of incidental motivations or consequences, the logical flaw in "completely conquered people are more loyal than allies" (until they believe they have a chance at rebelling, obviously).What finally made me drop the book was the unfortunately common theme of "strong willed MC turns into putty in front of (in this case random) pretty women

꠸ ꪖꪑ ꪻꫝꫀ ꫀ᥊ρ ꪮᠻ ꪑꪗ ᠻ꠸ꪀᧁꫀ᥅.᭙ꫀ᥇ꪀꪮꪜꫀꪶ ꠸ᦓ ꪑꪗ ᥇ꪮᦔꪗ, ꪖꪀᦔ ꫀ᥊ρ ꠸ᦓ ꪑꪗ ᥇ꪶꪮꪮᦔ.꠸ ꫝꪖꪜꫀ ᥴ᥅ꫀꪖꪻꫀᦔ ꪮꪜꫀ᥅ ꪖ ꪻꫝꪮꪊᦓꪖꪀᦔ ꪊᦓꫀꪶꫀᦓᦓ ᥅ꫀꪜ꠸ꫀ᭙ᦓ.ꫝꪖꪜꫀ ᭙꠸ꪻꫝᦓꪻꪮꪮᦔ ρꪖ꠸ꪀ ꪻꪮ ᥴ᥅ꫀꪖꪻꫀ ꪑꪖꪀꪗ ᥅ꫀꪜ꠸ꫀ᭙ᦓ.ꪗꫀꪻ, ꪻꫝꪮᦓꫀ ᥅ꫀꪜ꠸ꫀ᭙ᦓ ᭙꠸ꪶꪶ ꪀꫀꪜꫀ᥅ ꫝꪮꪶᦔ ꪖꪀꪗꪻꫝ꠸ꪀᧁ.ᦓꪮ, ꪖᦓ ꠸ ρ᥅ꪖꪗ...... ꪊꪀꪶ꠸ꪑ꠸ꪻꫀᦔ ꫀ᥊ρ ᭙ꪮ᥅ᛕᦓ!!!

please oh please don't drop this book. I don't want to be without this story.

The story is interesting; however, the author writing skill is mediocre... A lot of confusion and time skipping. The layout and is a bit unclear. The story contains some humor, but the story itself does not float well... It is a decent novel, hope The Author skills can improve and bring the novel up a few notch.

i gave u the 5 star for the promising story and the 120 chapter in 1 week .a man of focus indeed........................................................................................................

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Donbar had refilled the miniature crossbow affixed to his left arm. I had seen him fire it twice already, with extreme efficacy, but perhaps two bolts was its storage limit? A serious drawback for an otherwise powerful weapon.

(olimpus):- haan pehle bhi tu name hara nhi paya tha or abhi bhi nhi hara payega.

Why a long knife?, i thought that a sword was too much and a knife was too small, in novel's long knifes are said to be more useful than both.

"That's wonderful Nate. Now actually go to the class," Mr. Gio said, gesturing for me to hurry.

"I'm Ruby, 18 years old," said the black-haired girl with her hair in the wind. "I'm Tom's half sister, I'm a copper level hybrid, and unfortunately I do not have any skills beyond basic mana control.