Marvel: Rebirth of the Mad Scientist - Reviews

Unfortunately I can't find the RAW's for this.. But, Here is an Alternative:重生：我能听见校花的内心独白 - Rebirth: I can hear the inner monologue of the schoolgirlHopefully this Book will get Selected..

invisible dragon:kek if your aw-heal than i'm aw-kill hehe

"U-underbellies, go for their underbellies!"

The sinister figures chasing after the fairy-like girl appeared like enemies who held the ability to suppress the men without lifting any of their fingers.

"Maybe. At very least I think they'll ban out Sharpshooter." Kelly shrugged dramatically. "My guess is Miranda will say they won't."

I could only give him a slightly stiff smile at his comment.

'I swear that I will go up to Jenny at lunch time,' I said to myself feeling confident.

The wildlife was mutated by Aeyldarr's omnipotent essence that dispersed with the shockwave caused by the implosion and turned into savage beasts and powerful creatures possessing elemental Magus. The impact of the shockwave also dealt huge damage to the surrounding civilizations.

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Compelling beginning. The characterization and flow of the story gave a sense of immersion. Fun to read and not boring. This book had a lot of potential. Love to read more.

Your character is quite interesting.... Her attitude is where portrayed ..It shows her behavior from her life before this reincarnation cycle then the life and frustration of a being that keeps suffering and not making it or living up to a year...   Then you highlighted the emptiness already settling in  ..which relates more with what your character has gone through...A marvelous world... The God also showed and the fact that it called her daughter creates a wide branch you can go to...Is she really a God's child...Then what must she predict....what future will she see... Etc..Will she eventually find out about the fact that she is a God's child...The grammar... World building is on point.Especially the discussions.. interaction..Conversation between characters is well done...You are talented bro and your novel is wonderful...Keep up the good work...it got me hooked ...For lovers of reincarnation mixed with an interesting MC..This is the one for them..