?????Hello author-nim! I am here with a seriously thought out review, as I believe it is given time I review the story. This story is probably one of my favorites. Although this story is one of my favorites, I will not just give a brainless review with 5-stars. This review consists of my real views and tips/advice on how this story could be improved for future readers reading experiences. ??????? ℚ??????In my opinion the author's grammar, punctuation and word forming could be greatly improved. A lot of sentences are either missing words or worded terribly. Sometimes irrelevant sentences are put together instead of being seperated with a full stop. Originally I was going to give a 3-star for writing quality. However, because it wasn't completely unreadable, I gave it a 4-star. ????? ???????????For story development, I decided to rate it a 5-star. So far, from what I have read. The story development is good, it isn't too fast paced and it explains quite a few things. It shows the main character's process of returning to the same power of his previous life. The storyline/plot is very interesting and entertaining. I thoroughly enjoyed read this story so far.ℂ???????? ??????Character design, 2-star! Why? 1. There was almost no introduction to the main character at the beginning of the story. 2. Barely any explanation was made about his past life and history/background. 3. It was also unclear whether his name was the same as his current life in the past (I had to clarify with the author on this topic). ???????? ?????????I give the updating stability a 5-star. The author updates quite often. Most of the time 2 chapters are uploaded in one update. I am very satisfied with the upload times and chapters.????? ??????????World background is fairly decent. Although not much is explained in the beginning. I let it slide as the world background is later explained in more detail. 4-stars for world background.?????Hopefully author-nim doesn't find this review too harsh...(• ▽ •;)????? ℝ?????4-stars
