Marvel: Luke Spencer - Reviews

WHAT THE HELL kind of ending is that????? want a better rating. Give a better ending.

I wasn't going to do a review because it feels like cheating but all the others writers say they did it so here I am. I was surprised by how many people were interest in this strange story I came up with to join the competition. I didn't even get it out in time too enter so I had written it off. Yet now it's way more popular then Iron Will Reaches the Heaven which was the story I wanted to write most. This gives me mixed feeling but I'm glad people are enjoying this. I literally have no plan and am just making it up as I go for this one. Please stick with me on this unusual adventure!

This novel is pretty normal.If u want a mc who hides and cultivates and become stronger then this is for you.The story is not anything special just mc becomes stronger and defeats stronger enemy.There is pretty much no character development but the mc is smart as he doesn't leave behind any evidence after killing unlike the other mc's where they kill a person and someone stronger comes after them.I pretty much enjoyed it so if u r bored and have nothing to do then u can try this.There is a spoiler below??.Read at ur own riskNote:Don't expect any romance from this novel.The mc remains a virgin till the end.

Ill start with the good.Generally the story is Id say All characters have some depth and the longer a character is around the more depth they get which is good, not to say many characters are very much layered But they do feel unique generally.Taking this as a single work the world building is fine, it doesnt feel like the world turns for the MC.My biggest gripe with the story is the telease schedule, readers were promised at one point 3 chapters a day. Personally I dont care about quantity, I prefer quality. What irks me is the lack of management of expectations. If author prefers to release 2-5 chapters at a time then perhaps have a 3 day a week release schedule. Announce it and the expectations are managed. But as it is the release pattern is erratic and it tanks the stories rating.

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both the title and the synopsis have nothing to do with the story, I think they put the wrong story in by mistake.both the title and the synopsis have nothing to do with the story, I think they put the wrong story in by mistake.

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Just want to ask MC won't get cucked right?

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Hey the author here! Shamelessly giving myself 5 stars. I hope you enjoy reading my novel!If you don't like an overpowered MC you probably shouldn't read it, although the fights are mostly between disciples. The story is mostly travelling and exploring all the realms, and slowly but surely building up a Heaven Defying Sect. If you have any suggestions or criticisms I will be happy to hear them! Please place a chapter comment or a review!P.S. English is not my first language, so if there are spelling/grammatical mistakes please say so and I will edit my chapter.

As a Master's (Top 500) League of Legends player in Season 8, I would think I have an edge over other readers in this certain type of genre, so here are my two cents on the novel.The novel itself is great, I thoroughly enjoyed each of the chapters. Good writing along with good pacing makes the story an interesting read. It has decent enough characters and game backstory to make it enjoyable.The story does seem unrealistic to a certain sense. I think a good MOBA story boils down to how much the author itself understands the genre of MOBA's. Although he does explain the basic nitty-gritty of game mechanics, he fails to mention any important or groundbreaking that players with more skill would notice, and that will have an effect on how far the novel can progress linearly.It's fine since these guys are middle schoolers and are still learning about the game, but if he wants to bring this novel from a lighthearted read to an actual quality MOBA novel, it's going to take a lot of work. Overall, still a good read. There's no other MOBA novel to compare this to, so I guess it is a staple. There are things that could be improved, but the things the author does writes, he does correctly.

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