Malicious, Magical, Malfoy - Reviews

Hi author here, till chapter 9  I will try to lay down the foundation for mc and after that I will start to develop character and world.Please try and bear with the writing.As for Indian characters, i am an indian and would like to promote the culture of India( I really dont have much knowledge of chinese culture)thank you, and appreciate you guy's viewership.

This novel is still incredibly overrated due to 1) someone spamming 5 star reviews over and over, and 2) the novel itself is written very poorly. Sentences are stilted, with no real descriptions. It's like I'm reading a play giving bare bones directions, not a book. These characters don't feel real.

the book is a nice storyline  , I'm happy to read it

Continuing, he began to watch fight after fight, though they weren't interesting, he figured that he should for any case.

"Uh… I know I'll sound crazy and it's super hard to believe, but I fell asleep and woke up like this" I said removing the toilet paper bandage to show her my right hand.

"No no, first time okey but second time nah" Yoshino slice his katana toward the rabbit leg, He manage to cut the leg. Now the rabbit only has one leg, leaving it with 10% health. The rabbit cries, it don't move around and stay at one place only.

-At 8 years old he helped his dad with his company

"N-No you fucking bastard." She tried to kick at the murder making him back away for a little bit before he hit the mother in the back of the head with his metal bat. Killing the mother instantly... All that was left was a huge blood spot that littered the white carpet of the upstairs hall and a screaming child.

The sun was shining brightly but I didn't care about that. Today was my Maths examination but I just wanted to pass. I reach the school a little early than usual ,chatted with my "friends" a little. My friend are really nice people. They only talk to me when they need me and they wanted to cheat today obviously.well I didn't say "no" cause I can't. You see my social skills are lower than a turtle.

"In California. I despised the whole experience."

She then proceeded to drag me from shop to shop holding up dresses which she tossed to the side the minute she saw another that struck her fancy.

unfortunately they call me and suddenly they notice the girl whom I escort to our school then they dropped a millions of questions even their jealousy and envious keeping me nervous to talk on the bright side the girl defended me and said " sorry for cut your questions to him we met today and I am new here so it's a coincidence though" all of the sudden my friends listening to her then reply " okay we'll put this slide for today, however, where did you come from?". she replied "I came from Korea. I was transferred here though" when she explains my friends got an "ah" reaction meanwhile one of the students of Storm Academy yelled at me he said " YO! VINCENT WHAT A NICE COMEBACK YOU HAVE THERE!" after that some of the male students agree with him and the others came to me then said " hey bro how did you manage to survive the odds bro?