Magical Telekinetic Deku - Reviews

good story,I read it MTL.But after ch 630 he forget about his wife and family.As the story progresses there is not even mention of his family , even he comes to home,he just wants to seclusion than again new adventure .

Yes! Finally found an amazing novel of my favourite apocalypse genre!! Writing quality is excellent and so is the story development. A pity that the updates are slow, but it’s understandable since all authors have their own real lives to deal with.P.s. Just ignore those 1 star haters. In fact, the majority of the novels on Qidian Webnovel do not deserve 1 stars no matter how bad their novels are. Even those readers who have complaints about the stories are respectful enough not to do so. Those haters are just bitter that they can’t write for sh*t, so they try to vent their fustrations on others. How laughable...

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i just started reading but the story seems intersting, just that the grammar is too bad. i would suggest using grammarly. even the free version would help. I hope you will get an editor. if you can't find one (which is really easy to find) i could also offer to be an editor for the novel.

more chapters ...,.................... story is very good ....................... ,......................................................

Update please!!!!!!!!!!!!!?????????????????????????????????????????????????

well performance of the story line in english translation

Winter was coming.  There had been frost on the ground that morning.  She paused on the top of the ridge, and looked down into the valley below.  She was crouching, under some branches of a short tree, watching a herd of deer below her.

A cute voice called out to her. Mizuki glanced to her side and discovered a hand being stretched out for a handshake. She looked up to see the owner of the hand, revealing a cute girl with her hair tied into two buns on the top of her head.

'Ok then I'm going to enter the class hunters, for now.' Says Lexa, then she completes the form.

Lived: Phantora

Dulunya ia seorang panglima yang di takuti di Kerajaan Blamongan,setiap ada pemberontakan dan tindakan ia berada di garis depan mempertahankan Blamongan,tak sejengkal pun tanah Blamongan bisa di kuasai kerajaan lain.