Mafia Son's System [Dropped] - Reviews

*SPOILERS*At the point of making this review I have read all the way to chapter 225, I certain event in this chapter inspired me to make this review. First I want to talk about the writing, absolutely f@%#!*g great, the character development is great, the side characters are great, the world development is great. My only...problem with the writing so far is the development of the love interest, don't get me wrong I love that snake but the way the Author... ok ok let me give an example, in some latter chapters ghost says he couldn't even think about living with put that cute snake( sorry I just love Gaya = the cute snake ) but I don't feel enough attention was put on their relationship for this to be said when it was. maybe it's just me but that kinda buged me, but I also want to give the author props for not giving a harem, I personally dislike that trop.second thing I want to talk about is the history, of the world, of Michael/ ghost, of the powerful family's. The way the author revels this history is splendid, especially Michael's history.and to make sure I don't spend hours typing about this novel, because I could, I want to talk about one very important plot twist so I'm going to scream this nowSPOILER WARNING IF YOU ARE NOT AT CHAPTER 200 YET DO NOT READ THIS!The fact that the one character in this novel that is supposed to me Michael's arch nemis, the light to his dark, is his F#@%&!G brother! excuse! I was so surprised by this I put my phone down. I never expected this and I wsnt to give props, once again , to the author for surprising me.sorry for my bad grammar :)- One frosty fox

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After reading this book, I fell in love with martial art stories. I am great fan author. Keep up the beautiful work and forget to keep up with the captivation.

???This book is so well written.. wow...got me hooked from the first chapter.. five stars because it deserves it. keep going author.???

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Interesting plotline and a decent start but your upload schedule needs some work.

A good storyline, the characters are fascinating to an extent that grabs the readers attention. A beautiful picture is created through these words. Overall a nice novel.

the plot is very loved it, the characters especially to the main characters are admiring and I continue to read it by the way I like the synopsis. its very interesting.

There were only about ten blocks to my house, so I felt relieved, but at that moment I blinked a couple of times and from one moment to the other I found myself inside a strange glass tube.

S was always awed at her perfect imperfection. He knew she felt insecure with her out-of-fashion beauty, he could tell by how she tried to hide her almost translucid skin and slender but curvy body under those loose clothes, how she would hunch to avoid the spotlight, concious of her model like height. And yet she would forget those things when entranced and multitudes would hold their breath just to not to pollude her silvery voice when she talked, sang or laughed, ensnared by the light her eyes emmited. Eyes that could devour your soul with their everchanging irises, green when the sun was up and shinny, grey when winter came or the moon hit the sky.