MARVEL : BECOME THE DANGEROUS CREATION - Reviews

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beat mc f*king idiot .. like what? the fl likes him .. it's just his weak that's why she said she's protecting him... she clearly likes the mc... yet the mc laugh??? just bcs the fl protect him bcs his weak??? fcking beta mc.. who thinks everyone is against him

The translation is decent. The world building is like every other novel. My main problem is that the story development is way too fast. In 2 chapters, everyone went from hating him to giving him stares of acceptance. He also gains powers so fast.

this look like it's going to be pure chaos and i love chaos my understanding from your description is that an mental unstable person have a voice in his/she? head  die for some reason now got a system too resulting in pure chaos lets hope I got it right

it awesome anyway how will it turn out itll be awesome~~

"Oh my... and yes you may enter."

  The three reach the hill that connects all the districts. With Mai on her back, Yua says, "Taitsuke, I'll bring Mai home. Be sure to not lollygag and head home straight." The two disappear into the 7th district.

She thought about this for a while before a word popped into her head 'Sparrow' she said. The name just sounded right to her.

Her eyes watered with tears as she closed her eyes for the final time. Gaia threw her battered body across the battlefield, in front of Percy, with a huge shard of dirt that pierced her heart. Percy knelt down beside her lifeless body and sobbed uncontrollably over her. The Gods and the rest of seven watched with pity and tears in their eyes.

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Maymay:kamukhang kamukha mo nga yung kapatid mo xenon,napakagwapo din:)