Love, and Military Life? What was I thinking? - Reviews

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I love it very much, though there are a few errors, but it’s nothing that takes away from the story. I wish author would take a break from his other books so that he can focus on this more. The plot is so good.. the drama, the suspense, mix of real life activities and pure fiction in basketball. Very good mix and compliments well with the story.

The main character gets seven wishes in chapter 1 and there are grammar mistakes all over the place and in some parts of the story the grammar is so bad it's  unreadable. I also didn't make it past chapter 1. I also find it weird that there are no other reviews mentioning this. so in my opinion it's probably the other reviews are either fake or the people who wrote them are so in love with the idea of this story they can't see how badly it's written and then there's the possibility they're just trying to be nice.

if you like Dreamland adventure you'll like this novel the beginning is very similar currently at chapter 5 the story progress is very similar

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This story is not disconnected in various realms, which would require you to memorize a thousand people. It's all seemingly connected, thus being more enjoyable. You'll love it.

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But just to not make it seem suspicious I used my mental link with Rin to ask what she was doing "Hey Rin what are you doing?" I ask.

So without delay using my new power's I created a ton of clones and did my job as the new Death, and while I was at it I started the ritual to resurrect  Elizabeth. While I was preparing for the ritual I had a sudden thought if The God of death had forsaken his job for about 30 seconds and summon all his clones back he would've killed me... I guess that shows how important his job was. It seems like even, if I do resurrect Elizabeth my true body wont be able to leave this domain, so in the end I still wont be able to fulfill my promise...

"Here." Tristan open the door for her. When she had already seated in the passenger seat, he turns around to enter the driver's seat.