Love Me Again - Reviews

I've read chapter one and it caught my attention about the shakra thing that I only watch it on Naruto??? you give a diff. Touch of imagination in it! All in all, u did a great job... Keep it up, author...

Well im 200 chapters in 70 of it has been filler about skill and skill data not a hole lote of story progression for the mc or mc's because the writer jumps around from character to character perspective making it ruff to follow. The story has some major plot holes like getting rid of his dmg reduction skill then saying he needs more defensive skills. Then getting rid of the ai for the system but still has ai by turning into a fairy??? or something was never specified. Honestly their isn't any conformity in the writing style or plot. Its not bad if you can get past all of the filler but not worth 10 stones achapter.

He had made her cry. Those tears were his fault. He didn't have any rights to console her. If it wasn't for his d*mnable incestuous heart, she would not have to suffer so much. These thoughts swirled in his mind, making it even more unbearable for him. At that moment, Hyuk felt that the pain in his heart was even more painful than his physical pain.