Lost In Her Eyes - Reviews

Really a nice and good story but unfortunately it needs huge editing. Some names which are unknown are appearing suddenly. This makes reading a bit difficult. Also some chapters in this story are getting boring and stretching in length because of unnecessary mentioned things and conversations.

They felt that they had made a huge blunder so they asked for a minute from everyone and turned around to discuss when Jenny said to Jacob "I told you that we didn't have to mix it."