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Hi, author of MPEESD here.This is my first time ever writing a novel so even I am not sure how things will go.Tbh, I hate writing essays for assignments, but writing this story was surprisingly an enjoyable experience for me.Anyway, I hope you readers will enjoy the story and hopefully provide some feedback so I that can improve the novel.-ForbiddenArchive

Has potential, many grammatical mistakes and the names aren't capitalizedIt's readable tho and the the issue with capitalization has been fixed in the latest chapter.

it will definitely different from other Kingdom building novels .you should try it .

[ Quest Completion at 99% ]

"Mr. Cho, you are very talented! This is exactly how I envisioned the necklace to be. I am very thankful to you!

Today is my last exam man I am tired and all thanks to my brother who helping me all night long I don't sleep ...but he look fresh eating his breakfast and reminding me to do well ...

I shrug, "I just did. Maybe I simply…wanted to see this house again. Of course, by then it had been converted to apartments. I live on the top floor now."

Arawn glanced over at the king who sat on the ground with lingering horror in his eyes. The archmage was by his sides, pouring healing ether into his back. When one of the hounds came over to help him up, his hand was slapped away.

Magna suddenly felt close to snapping yet remembering how his anger can affect him, he slowly took a deep breath in an attempt to calm down.

"I'm just letting you ride cause you're interesting" he said as he started walking and pulling the horse. I awkwardly sat there trying not to be weird. "And just relax , he won't bite. "

Judging by the hole in the satellite picture