Lorian Ellins - Reviews

So far this has been an excellent book to read, goin between each character an their problems/worries is great. Keeps me wondering what is next to happen to any of them.. love the book so far

The story suffers from the same flaws as most chinese webnovels: low quality writing/editing, unoriginality, unnecessary monologues and info dumps. The same character tropes like in A LOT of other stories fx: The fat 'funny' friend, and the beautiful and strong (possible) love interest. The story also suffers from 'dragging on the story to meet word count'-syndrome.                                                        Thanks to obsoletefactor for review.

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Hey Cheers another novel translated by EndlessFantasy Translation :)They usually translate good title so maybe for now I will give 4 stars because I havent see the novel yet although the synopsis does remind me another novel.... ATG well because the mc deal with poison and more thanks to EndlessFantasy Translation :)

I m  at the initial chapters but I find this novel very interesting. There is a unique story development. But the writing quality is extremely poor and difficult to read. The character design seems ok. There was good stability of update a while back now it has been more than a month. Cannot comment on world background as I have not read more chapters

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Hello  Please, do you have a discord server or contact? I would like to discuss with you if possible .Also I like your story. Good job????????????????

Currently I have got to try new books in difderent kind of genres which I had never tried before. Yours also in that group. Yet, when I was trying out this I realised that soon I will get iterrsted in this genre too.. Thanks to you author, I am saying. Actually, honestly saying my opinion. In love with this. Hope to continue since it's a new experience for me. So for now, I am telling you author please keep going.. I will recommend this to my frieds, so they could read this too. Keep going author. This work should be continue for the sake of us. ❤️❤️❤️?

Fantastic! I’ll have to tell the rest of my family about this. I’m really impressed with the use of more eastern tropes in your writing. You’ll have to write more for the other potatoes to be fully satisfied!

The group of people stopped in front of the platform, and the vice headmaster Shang Baien, as well as a few teachers, walked up to it. The vice headmaster sat in the chairperson's place with a straightforward and imposing manner, and calmly said, "The Magical Beast hunting competition occurring once every three years has now officially ended. According to the academy's regulations, after the task has been completed, we will now hand out awards. I would like to now invite all the people who had stayed in the forest for the entire 3 days and have gathered 2 monster cores to simultaneously step forwards."

Screams of agony all around me. Blood flowing under my boots. Will I die here was the only thought going through my head." WHAT ARE YOU DOING STANDING THERE. KILL! KILL!" A scream awakened me form my blank state of mind. I start to charge towards the enemy. Ratmen, I think their called it doesn't matter. Their gonna become many of the dead clans under the rule of the new demon king. I bang my shield into one of their heads bashing it in. I almost throw up at the sight of it. I slice ones throat open. Then "BAM" I am hit from behind, i turn around just to see a spear heading toward my face. Then darkness... i look up to see a beheaded ratman fall over. Behind the dead body is a high demon in golden armor. He walks towards me and then says " Weakness disgust me. " I hold my lip know the slightest noise could end up what me dead. I'll  remember his face.

'He is more attractive than I thought, now that I get a good look at his face.'