Long Lost Uchiha (Trapped In Ninja World) Prophecy - Reviews

Can you please increase the number of chapters releasing per day... 5 is too too too short Ehh baby, shey o wa okay bayi

The further into the story you go the worst it gets ... At first it was acceptable and you were waiting for the story to pick up. Then the story picks up its pace and takes a nose dive. The author try's to make the world and reactions of the nobles "realistic" and follow a certain "Noble Creed" but then contradict this in their actual actions. Then says this is normal to do things in the dark for them but he cant because reasons? We waited for a battle to happen for 20 plus chapter but all that happened was nonsense and character point of views and intrigue that makes no sense or don't matter. The battles in this novel are tons of build up chapters. Then the battle is 1 chapter long and all about morale and troop quality. Which wouldn't be so bad if the build up chapters didn't already talk about this so the battle chapter is basically a summary of what we know then the final result. Then the next few chapters are about chasing the routers and clean up and maybe upgrades. Then 10 plus chapters on reactions. Honestly this is just the tip of the iceberg and there are far worse things in this book. Its just Bad  

You read a story and you don't like the ending. You also prepare your own end. So is this story. The reader changes the story he/she wants behind his/her name. Their stories are long and cliche.

my staff start to glow and it say that combat mood is on.

They had both never felt such killing intent before and were caught by surprise, they only stood their dumbly as their bodies wouldn't move. The figure sprinted over with a huge momentum, raising his hand as he got ready to attack.

"Maam Cristina, yung Dad niyo po..." Napatigil ako sa paglalakad at nakaramdam ng tensyon nang biglang sumigaw si Manang Fe.

10. Absolute mental defense*new

So the second part my training would would be to try and control how much I blue fire I gather and how to monitor how much I have. we also have to work on Gathering the blue fire well standing and moving cuz the first time I did it while sitting and you know how that one. so at first to monitor how much I have reset this little band that had the needle that attached onto my wrist and that monitored it at first and then so when the band started glowing red I would know that I have reached my limit before I explode into a bowl of blue fire. so I mean when we were stuck it on it hurt for a second but other than that so how to control it I would release some of it when I move my hand like punch I had released blue fire out of my hand and then the target I hit kind of blew up into a fiery ball of blue fire. I had a harder time with using kicks to release the blue fire cuz I lose my balance when the target wouldn't blow up in the ball of blue fire so we worked on that for roughly 3 hours I finally got the hang of it though.And so a day later we took the band off and I worked on monitoring the blue fire on my own when we took it off at the wound that it made kind of hurt but I'm fine definitely so that doesn't matter. so while I was training to monitor the blue fire on my own I ended up getting it almost instantly so that's good.

"the power is your but don't make me regret my decision"

Rain walk to Yuuichi and grabbed his arm and pulled it.

* Don't be too creative over making fantasies with the guy because of which u have to regret wasting your time instead of studying

Sun - you look cute .