Little BL stories - Reviews

oooh boy, this is poorly written with Ok translation. If you want something brainless to pass time this will work. If you are looking for a proper city builder skip this story. There is little reason or logic to much of what occurs. All the characters including MC are very flat and 2D. Every simple action the MC makes gets praised as genius ....

My kind of humor and an interesting story. If you can handle minor grammar issues (there/their, your/you’re, lack of commas, ’a lot’ being one word instead of two…) then it is an amazing book worth reading.

It's bland. Wow. MC GETS TO CHECK IN TWICE FROM TWO BLOODLINES! SO OP! SO GREAT! It's really important as his check-in ability is limited? Not really. It doesn't really matter. He checks in every now and then. It's basically overpowered MC without comedy or real motivation to exist...

I think the story is amazing and very interesting. I would recommend to others, but this is just my opinion. Also have a great day everyone.

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15 chapters in:I've gotta say this novel is really well articulated. The fighting! the characters coolness!!! The engagement to the readers!! the story visualization!!! KYAAAA!!!!!ehem, I mean:-Amazing debut so far.-Great usage of words.  -Characters are really well written.-World building is very interesting. -Squeaky smooth story pacing.Well, there is only 15 chapters so far, still in itty bitty baby stage. But the potential this story can grow to... BOOM!  Huge!10/10 would recommend.

This talk about a person who has his own world which is my cup of tea and better than some light novels out there but the only problem I have is that I feel the development is go8ng too fast

"Right?" Lie asked while grinning.

Mind making him time travel and sending him into the past with miyuki to save his aunt from getting raped then you can start the harem, someone tried to write but dropped it after some chapters