Life of an inteligent system - Reviews

The writer of this novel is a brazilian youtuber called "Zy" that was exposed a few months ago for exchanging nude pictures with an underage girl that was one of his subscribers. She was around 15.

This novel sure is alluring. The characters all have unique traits and you can't help but love them. The world background (read until ch. 19) is kinda messy to me, it's a modern world with technology and also hidden cultivators with strange skills and magic. The story so far is enticing with humorous interactions, a little suspence, and all the unexpected situations. Really like this. Hope it gets faster and better

Thanks author you did a great job at making I like the way you decided to make the character more to the passive side then what most others would not many light novels sit the mc as a passive guy and fewer have the mc making things and this is the only one I read where the mc dose music.**. Thanks keep up the good work can't wait for more chapters

it's not a bad story, but you need punctuation.  I didn't see 1 period at all. run this through grammarly, and it will help it a lot.

Nice It based on Ohio I really like the MC

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"Yak, waeyo?" tanya Yoona dengan lembut. Sehun tidak menjawabnya. Ia terus menarik Yoona menjauh dari sana. "yak, wae geuraeyo?" masih tidak menjawab. "lepaskan tanganku!" Yoona menjadi kesal dan menghempaskan tangannya, hal itu kontras membuat genggaman Sehun terlepas dari tangannya. "ada apa denganmu? Kenapa kau menarik tanganku seperti ini?"

"Lavigne... kasi... ano ehh... ahmmm..." sagot ni Steven na para bang naghahanap nang tamang sagot.

Because the word novel is thrown about loosely by publishers and because of their printing subterfuge, teachers often don't realize that a particular work is so manageable in terms of length. Here then are my recommendations, in alphabetical order, of excellent works of fiction that fall between short story and novella:

"No Problem" Luna accepted and took out another card. "Ability Card Activate! Elemental Hydro Pump Cannons!" The Wall crumbled down and Blank pointed it arms at the Dragnight. The Shields on his arms split open from the middle, revealing two cannon barrels on each arm. A blast of water shot out from the barrels, and towards the Dragnight.

He was left all alone now.

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