The fragment holder is an interesting idea.Hope their would system update in order to expand to other games.Get more skills to support him real life.Also it would interesting adding supernatural to world but that's just my opinion.
Im a huge fan of TBATE and when i first saw this i was super skeptical about It. However this story is so similar yet also so different from TBATE. Same ideas just a different execution and i love it good job author.
Maybe a bit too early to make a review, but I decided to make one for now. Great MC, I like his character and the story line. The writing quality is very good along with the world building. You have the right to be biased since it's your work. Yet, don't make it easier for the MC despite the fact that he had died once and now had a host system.
'Her hand are smooth' Tristan though to himself when he shake Chris's hand. 'At a closer look she is indeed quite a beauty, her eyes, her aura but most importantly those red lips' a small and strange sense of excitement arise within Tristan.
People have their own life. Life was a very complicated thing with infinite variables that may change by just a single incident. One shouldn't be surprised if a person does something unexpected. Even if there is common sense and logic, life is life and you wouldn't know what is going to happen next. It is safe to say that there is not one person who can understand each and every other person and deal with it.
