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Legends of the System Creator
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Pretty decent very well written surprisingly look forward to its rise or downfall depending on how you take it. The excessive use of they Thier them got me f'ed up make it confusing in some part after several chapters ehhh. Will be back once there be mo chapters for sure Much love
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Duckin hell is thisThe story r messed, not recommended???????????????????????????????????????????????
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I really don't understand all the good reviews. This is a good idea done really poorly. Story is rushed, characters are cookie-cutter cliches, and MC becomes OP way to fast. For example - he gets a sword skill, uses his cheat to upgrade it, and then without truly studying the new skill he swings a Tree Branch and slices off a piece of a mountain. I could only get to chapter 17 before I gave up on this mess.
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Garbage... You can tell that the Author didn’t want to put any real effort into making this novel.I gave up after 12 chapters.Personally, i could rant all day on this novel and still need another week before I reach a point of having nothing left to complain about.Waste of my time.Don’t waste yours.P.S. - You’ll probably find some of my paragraph notes if you decide to read, even after my warning.
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I enjoyed the story, it is very different from what I usually read, but it has been an enjoyable read so far, and I will continue reading it. I will not go into details about the plot in this review, as to not spoil anyone. This was a joy to read. I found no glaring mistakes, it was very pleasant to read through and the flow was good. I think the plot is quite interesting, I had a few issues with the first few chapters, both because I have not read many stories in this genre, and because it was slightly confusing, but after reading further into the novel everything started to get explained well and the pace was wonderful.I think that the world and characters gets more fleshed out the further into the story you reach. It is explained well, without feeling intrusive into the story at all. I would suggest you to try it out.
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The characters are life like and the start of the story was very interesting. I would like to see more of Archer and adventures through this world, looking forward for more chapters from the author!
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This time he felt no fear about entering, in fact he was willing to enter on his own accord. And whomever would deny him of this satisfaction would feel his wrath; or at least witness his grovelling and relentless whining.
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Halos lumandag ang puso ko sa gulat dahil sa biglang may nagsalita sa likuran ko. Lumingon ako at salubong na kilay ni Dexter ang nabungaran ko.
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sad i really liked the story
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Cloudhawk relaxed his clenched fists. "Got it."
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She stroked his cock for a very long time before making the jump, making the leap to the next step. She opened her mouth abundantly wide and took in a bit. Only half of his big glans seemed to be able to fit in her pretty and a rather tiny mouth. No matter how much she pushed him deeper and deeper, the glans wouldn't enter much more. She made some progress there and there, applying some tight pressure against the skin of his colossal member; she now had about three-quarters of his glans in her mouth. It was enough for her. This was satisfying progress, alright. She used her long, slutty tongue to caress the bottom half of his glans. Her tongue could be seen swinging from right to left outside of her mouth as she started sucking him off.

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his mom noticed the shattered bits of the alarm clock lying there

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