Legend of an Uchiha: Naruto Fanfic - Reviews

should have bought the whole thing I read it with my free passes.

Actually quite nice. Just I don't know where the plot is going yet.Writing quality: 4/5 not bad not bad.Stability: 3/5 I think it's a good idea to update 4-5 chaps a week, daily would be my rate of 5/5Story: 5/5 based on 4 chaps - not sure what direction it'll go yetCharacter: 5/5 pretty original background, haven't seen a story about the voice behind the lip syncer beforeWorld: 5/5 I'm really not sure so I'm putting 5 for nowAll the best! Keep on writing!

I like the story But author if you see this can you fix the misunderstandings in the novel it's getting annoying with them thinking he is in love with them while he is just trying to survive also I hate harem

invisible dragon:heh unjust law is also law!

[Decription: If the territorial expansion and upgrade was left to the host the system fear it will take an eternity therefore the system has taken the matter into its own hands to lead the host towards success.]

As I was walking I approached one of the piles of rocks, except they weren't rocks. Looking at it, it was a pile of shit. It was one of the worst things I've smelt along my not to long journey. running away from this soul destroying stench, I made my way toward the mountain.

No matter how hard Bellona pulled, she couldn't free her weapon much to her shock.

Start line!

I finally, after what seemed like a century, made it to my room. I laid him down on the bed. I then sat next to him and sighed.

This is a fun story with some unique characters that make me laugh.  The stories are creative.  The design of the world is so vivid.  The characters are memorable,  The story is fast and exciting.  The magic and monsters are creative.  I can't even say how much I LOVE this story!!!!!

Hmm I Found it interesting and hope so it'll go on the same... I didn't get to know when I reached it's 17th chapter ??

“Do I really look like a guy with a plan? You know what I am? I’m a dog chasing cars. I wouldn’t know what to do with one if I caught it! You know, I just… *do* things.” – The Joker