Legend Unit - Reviews

At the start, I liked the story. The plot is good. But what has become painful to read is the repeated severe mental or physical injury of the main character at the end of every major arc. It is as if his abnormally massive good karma is just for show and he is plagued by bad luck Everytime he tries to do something major.

I am not liking it. one the MC acts like he can survive anything when caught by law enforcers and blatantly tries to help them after thier mistreatment. I don't want him to oppose them but keeping his distance would be logical in such a situation. second he could have said he was the one who created the chip which would let him off the hook but he didn't even though he knew that Qin guy would have reported his name already.

This story has a great amount of plot-holes and a mc with brain problems.To add to that the grammar is horrific and the author switches between perspectives(I/He).I personally can not see why this story has a rating with over 4 stars.Just going back and rereading/rewriting could improve the story imo, as the basic premise is quite decent.

Interesting work.  Hope for more releases and updates for Power stones..  I rate 4 as it is still new. ???????????????????????????????????????

Hey guys, author of Chaos Simulation here. Plugging my own work.This is a story that I've been writing in my head for at least six years. It definitely starts out a little slow, as this is the first time I've ever written a fiction story for others in my life. My goal is to publish at least 12 chapters a week, possibly more depending on how popular the story gets. If nothing else I love sharing the story with others and maybe you can get the same amount of joy out of reading CS as I have writing it. I have four arcs planned and the story has a definite ending. Any comments or questions about the novel I'm happy to answer. Until then please enjoy!

I love romance....I knew I would definitely enjoy this book for sure. Good job author, I didn't plan to read it but the book cover is just so attractive. ??

It seems interesting. Just build up on the scenes before moving to the next one. This makes the book more full of suspense and scene that can make the plot more detailed.

At this point it seems like a good novel, the descriptions of the scenes are developed and it has interesting elements.

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So it was up to me, 5 archers, 2 wizards, and 5 rogues to clear the path to clear the way for the two knights for consecutive stuns. And because we were running out of time before Phase four appears, I had to switch my balanced gear to a more offensive gear.

"My head" Luffy groaned slowly coming to "what happened?"

Ano daw?