Lady's Sickly Husband - Reviews

thank you author for this wonderful story ...️...️...️

Hi everyone, DNW's author here. Im sure many of you would be wondering how a novel has so many chapters and no reviews or comments, and that's because it had to be moved here after licensing. You can find the original here with most of the initial free chapters and all comments and reviews. https:// w w w .webnovel.com/book/the-dawn-of-the-new-world_11726558706492805

this is like a novel written by a 10 year old.  The mindset of the mc and his wife is stupid beyond stupidity.This novel's idea is great. But the delivery of the whole thing ruined it. The novel requires business knowledge but the author doesn't even know how a company and business industry works."oh someone offended me from that family, I'll cut off their shares and buiseness tadaa" rinse and repeat like this  and there's not even a downside regarding those decisions.There's not even any deep thinking of the mc's decision. There's no cleverness. It's like a little kid telling his parents to demolish a school because he feel like doing so. This novel is trash.

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The world is a mix of cultivation and fantasy elements.System and cultivation, who doesn't like them, the author has used the System as a good input in the cultivation system.In this world the mc is not the only one with the system, the system does not make anyone op, it just makes all standard.The MC is only a human who took advantage of the early bonuses, becoming a bit stronger than all others.He constantly works hard to become stronger and is not exactly a weak-a*s, as he uses his wits to survive more, different from many MC that rely on Luck and power eruptions to survive, this one at least tries.And the part about the half-slime half-man status of his, it is shown that some de merits have been applied to him instead of just merits.

Well, it's my book so of course I'm gonna rate high! :DHave fun reading though.Please tell me if anything needs improving and how the novel is

author really outdid himself on this one ?? love how it starts out I'm currently on chapter 5 ???imagine

"Hmm.... so have you decided on the names yet?"

I walk into the class and see Darnuto crouching on top of a desk and looking into Emo's eyes. Are they fighting or... Oh, Darnuto and Emo are now kissing, they should probably do this in private. OH SH*T, THEY ARE STARTING TO STRIP, NO, NO, NO, THIS IS A CLASSROOM. WHY ISN'T THE TEACHER HERE TO STOP THEM. WHY IS EVERYONE CHEERING. I HAVE NO PREJUDICE AGAINST HOMOSEXUALS, BUT THIS IS A CLASS, AND WE ARE LIKE 8 YEARS OLD.

Elsa: diyos ko akala ko to too na...panaginip lang pala....napanaginipan ko ang anak ko ang aking anak na lobo napanaginipan ko na buhay pa sya buhay pa ang anak ko...

Over an hour past and Teru and Light hadn't been found.

His strength reached 61 points, which might already be better than original.