LOVE or OBSESSION - Reviews

Where at bro?

This has great potential with only a couple chapters in with the exception that the sentences go from first person to third person. Just an example, Is "my hand moved to her side" meant to be "my hand moved to MY side" or "HER hand moved to her side"? Pick one and stick with it.

Yes yes yes

why do you post just 2 or 3 short chters.  I have been reading this for months. I have paid enough to purchase a dozen books.  so at least post enough chapters to make it worth while. not just a couple of paragraphs and call them chapters. if I ever finish this book I'll never purchase another one