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I love your writing style, it's top-notch
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I previously gave 3 stars but then I thought about it, why be stingy it's a fun novel and maybe more ppl will notice if it goes higher, didn't know how to delete the previous review so there u go
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Great story,  great plot, great beauty, it is just too much sexual content which I rarely seen. So at least ADD Tage R16+ (It is mature content so people know) can’t wait for the next chapter.
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Ngl, this is what i wanted! I love the story and especially the mc, Etc. I would love to see more of the nocel and yeah. I support ya!!! Looking forward to see more.
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Looks like this has a better translation than the other reviews indicate. Not sure if something changed since they left their reviews or what. Overall, it seems like a pretty good story. I find the MC to be really entertaining. Yes, there is a system, but I think the MC's personality so far at least makes it interesting. Same with many of the other characters especially the sect leader.
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you have an amazing attention to detail. i love the world you have built. Maybe try pulling at the reader heart, certain phrases or moments in his life.
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The female lead will die in the story. No other twist. Smooth flow of the plot. Character development is good. Inspiring work.If you are up for Godly love stories that tackle hope, faith, and family, please try this story.
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It's an amazing novel, but I unfortunately can not continue. The characters are intertaining to read, and the author seems to have thought out their personalities well. The world seems active (even without the mcs intervention), which is a good sign in terms of world development.The writing quality is ok. It's not the best, but it is readable. The grammer mistakes sometimes break immersion, but overall, it's readable.The updates aren't too bad, although personally, I would prefer faster releases, but I know that people have busy schedules and don't have the whole day to write their books.My problem stems from the mc and the reoccurring dominant females. The princess who seems to find the mc amusing for some reason, and gives the feeling that they are bonded in some way. The advisor to the King of the Golden Crow Kingdom, who the mc seems to have a soft spot (and view her as a source of peace for him), or at least seems will have a close relation to the mc one way or another(though I don't know how close). The part which made me dejected the most is when the mc (in a vulnerable state after battle with 2 former rank 8s) chooses (willingly) to go to the advisors hideout due to him feeling at peace in HER hideout. The mc seems to try and project loneliness, but his actions and thoughts seem to desire some form of companionship (either platonic or more intimate, I don't know). An example of this is during the inheritance at the beginning with the woman he had saved for his plans but grown fond of, where although he had already made countermeasures for the liklihood of betrayal (he killed her), he seemed hopeful that she wouldn't due to her perceived innocence (which he was incorrect to believe in it would seem).Don't get me wrong, the book is amazing, hence why I gave it a 4/5, but it just isn't my cup of tea. I expected a loner mc who either slowly descends into loneliness due to his ambition and goals (which he seems to lack, or have any drive in), or one who was always a loner, but I don't get the feeling this is how this book will turn out. So, in conclusion, this book is recommended for anyone looking for a ruthless mc, but not a loner in their path to the top.
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As a commoner, she doesn't want to stand in my way out of fears of my father hehe!
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Jun wanted to ask what he is talking about, but he kept the silence as he felt the agony in Ray's voice.
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It was a good idea, but it didn't make sense anyway.

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