Kingdom of Rebirth - Reviews

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it would  be really cool I you us the song  strawberry cake by xdinary heroes  the have the same theme your going  and the chapter it can be about he bad ex girlfriend who found out he was becoming famous and then he released that song

seems pretty good with the whole 3 chapters I've read

What the actual frick was the ending? THE most rushed ending I have ever read. it's basically about 4/5's of the way through the story arc and it just wraps its self up in about 5 chapters. It's like the author had 15 minutes to live and wanted his book done before he died. Other than the story being garbage the characters are painfully mediocre and become cardboard cutouts about halfway through. The world building is a huge missed opportunity as to begin with it has a great premise but utterly fails to be unique or interesting and falls into the trap of generic "lower level world -> higher level world -> even higher level world".The translation quality is pretty great for this website, which while not saying very much, is nice. With the book being complete the stability of updates is automatically perfect.Translation quality: 8/10Stability of Updates: 10/10Story Development: 1/10Character Design: 2/10World Background: 3/10Overall: 4.8/10 (Dragged up heavily by Stability of Updates and Translation Quality)I wouldn't recommend. What a shame.

Update? Please??? Author, you come back here and give us more awesome content or I will explode!

"Shut up Punya... I know everything. I've seen the care and love you both share... My only request is please stay loyal to him atleast... He loves you...." said Prakruth.

We walked toward it I sat in the seat in the back while Caleb got into the driver's seat I guess and Josephine got into the seat next to him in the front.

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As I was running through an urban jungle of buildings and asphalt rivers, I noticed something was off. Call it instinct, Jedi premonitions, 6th sense, whatever you like, but the very air and ground seemed to emanate warmth and friendship. Something was going to happen, I was sure of it. The street was deserted. There wasn't a single soul in sight, not even that annoying bird that's always chirping or any cars driving by.

Nain kemudian mengusap pelan bahu Zei. Zei semakin tak bisa menahan air matanya hingga jatuh membasahi pipinya.

Hey op here if there's anything wrong please let me know. As I'm reading and proofreading at the same time this won't be fast. I'm not going to just throw up the slop that is the "original translation" as this is something I might re read as the reincarnated greek god fantasy genre isn't very big atm.

hello guys reuploaded the novel againzas promised