Killo: Ashes to Ashes - Reviews

I'm not sure what the story is about, but I'm sure it's about a lot of things. I'm sure it's about a lot of things, but it's about a lot of things, and it's about a lot of things, a romance out of nowhere a plot so cliché I have nothing against clichés but if it's badly exploited it's just horrible to read, the intrigue that we see is interesting I find the story of the moon god good and the wolf clan too, overall it's just badly exploited

Its really great you would enjoy reading this. You can easily catch up to the latest chapter. The only problem is the update schedule but he is trying and thats all matters keep focusing on your studies and worry about the other stuff later.

I'm curious about the female figure at the beginning of the story who is said to be a mysterious figure who invites Sakamoto, what she said sounded very suspicious

How the fk is Mc 15 and every other side character they literally act like 10-13 years old at most.And than there is the Fact that Mc turns put to be a Beta Simp at chapter 20 something that was so put if nowhere just because he has seen 1 goodlooking girl.

Her eyes were lifeless, like a dead fish's.

Mr. Stan was interrupted by a sudden kick to his back which sent him rolling on the ground.

It was a black short-sleeved shirt, with a pair of tight fitting capris that were the same black color as the shirt. A pair of sandals, oddly formed and designed, rested besides the clothing. I hesitatingly changed into them, and frowned. The clothing felt so strange against my skin, and it made me fidgety. There was also a large rectangular holder of some sort, and I ended up tucking it into my pocket because I couldn't understand how to put it on. The sandals were secure and slightly too big for my feet, but close enough to where I wouldn't stumble or trip if I ran.

Its my first time in writing a story (a fan fiction) hope u guyzz like it. Each & every kind of comments are accepted whether negative or positive every comment is valuable, plzz do comment ... Hope for the best FINGERS CROSS .. Plzz ignore typo errors

*DING*

As she leaned forward opening her cute mouth before she could bare her teeth he caught her lips with his and because her mouth was already open he snuck in something extra.

"Do not worry, I will not be hasty, I will act with caution," Goku replied calmly.

" you died for them  and they managed to live  all of them were armed  with high calibure guns while you had nothing  and yet  you did it without fear of  death."