Kasou Kuukan no Utage: Kajutsushi Miyakomori Ayahito no Nazotoki - Reviews

I came here from IRAS. The translator, Legge, has been consistent both in quality of translation and speed of update so I believe that this will continue in this novel.The introduction so far has brought out a world after thr end of it. The descriptions seem to be similar to any post-apocalyptic scenarios but the focus seems to be on Ren and his platonic/brotherly relationship to Lin. There is no information pointing out to gay stories so pretty much awesome MC in a bitchy world.

story is too long winded. that is my main problem with it. at some point you pay for 10 or 20 chapters and maybe a day or two pass in the timeline that is too slow paced especially if you expect  me to pay for each chapter.he build a nice house for himself, thats fine, but was it nessecary to spend 7 chapter describing it? and then another 2 for his sisters POV+ 1 cahpter moving in? 10 chapters, 60-70 coins, for what?the he starts getting involved in music and now you can enjoy a dedicated chapter at least for each instrument he masters(he has grandmaster lvl skill for that so he only needs to practice a little to improve drastically) this was not nessecary just tell us he practiced those instruments and move on etc. etc.8 chapters on the first day of interviews for his anime studio(chapter 120-128), most of these employees will be forever name and faceless why spent so much time on that? then there is the 2nd 3rd and 4th phase of interviews so buckle up. the studio opens in chapter 225 by the way. to be fair this is not all just interview they are also starting to produce their first anime, there are a lot of slice of lif parts which are fine and he is producing an album where almost everything is micromanaged which too is too long winded.its still a good story though. i would give it 4 stars if it wasn't for the unnessecary length.

Although I love the concept ,the characterisation and world building is atrocious . Most characters aren't even 2 dimensional, dialogues are horrendous and shows how naive and childish the MC and/or author is. It is astonishing to see the writing quality is the best part of the story.

at first this book was amazing.. suddenly everything went downhill with new characters being introduced without proper story support ..I can't even explain my disappointment.

comparing dual cultivation with this masterpiece is like comparing heaven and earth, this novel has already reached a divine level, it is so good.

This is a copy of another novel with the same name. Didn’t even bother to change the cover. I will now 1 star all of your stolen novels. Imagine stealing IP. You don”t even translate them. You just steal them from other sites.

It is truly one of the best stories I've read so far. The writing quality,pacing, characters everything is perfect. The only thing I am worried about  is  romance but it is still highly recommended

The characters lack depth. Especially the wife. I would have forgotten her if she wasn’t mentioned once in a while. The protagonist doesn’t seem to think before acting, making me wonder why he did this or that. An exemple is having the USA agents killed. It doesn’t help anyone. Also, he doesn’t seem bothered after being directly responsible for the murder of hundreds of people.The technology he is offered is way ahead of what Earth is capable, and he should have to spend a serious amount of time and ressources developing the intermediate steps. He reach those steps too easily (if he didn’t bypass them). The author should check technology trees in games such as the one who share its name with the title of this work, and remember that theory and practice/application are differents.Also, the system rewards are much to great for the tech development he completed.World background is lacking. Little to no description of the characters, surroundings, buildings and inventions.Interesting, but the execution need some work.

At first nothing happened, which disappointed Adam...

Just as her punch was about to make contact, Moriah's body transformed into a myriad of shadowy bats.

First person to see? In the midst of his brain he was replaying the thought process of this little girldont tell me she really appeared from the only thing left behind by her? Why did she appeared here..what profound mystery is hidden here?

"It's Christmas Eve, can you please open the window?" I requested politely.