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are you sure mc was a top spirit master of the world?or maybe he was but just got there because of his master as i cant imagine a person with such a brain becoming an expert without dying 10 times just because he underestimated everything,i am at chap 63 right now and in just 2 weeks mc has at least underestimated 5 things which all end up being biting him in the back but he is just so arrogant that he does not even want to acknowledge his wrong but insist that everything he did was right and just kept underestimating everything again and again,i think it would be better if you started the story with a different style like mc coming from earth and getting ONLY knowledge about manuals and future or something else which would atleast make sense that why mc just want to underestimate everyone and everything,i does not used to like the mcs of other chinese novels because they are arrogant but atleast they never underestimate there opponent or the intelligence of others as the mc of this story is doing,he took my understanding of peerless expert to a whole new level.please change the plot device as it is a great novel and i see a lot of potential in it just by reading 60 chapters but sorry but i cant imagine mc ever being a top expert with his current mindset he is more like a little kid that got knowledge of manuals and future events and thats all,this should never equate to mc having more wisdom as he seems to have a lot of battle experience not life experience and does not know how to handle people without looking down on them

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