Jack of the Devil's death forged body - Reviews

First I'm quoting someone else's review:???. ??? ???. Be a good person and go give this novel a like even if you don't like it. We need more Korean novels in this site. Let's work together and give every single Korean novel in this new activity a like.Second, this novel has NU page and some KR MTL sites also already have this novel.

if you're expecting this novel to be good then you'll be disappointed, mc has a low IQ and trashy reasoning.Like I know he has extraction system, but that doesn't mean he don't need to cultivate, come on he spend two years on the first chapters like for nothing, he didn't even train his weapon skills much less cultivate, its just like he is living mortal life.

I hope you update soon this one is so good so far I want to see how it turns out!

This is my initial review to show my support for the author until the story is completed. Keep up the great work, and may you see the rightful end with Jason!I'm hoping you could also help me with my beloved work, WAR GROUNDS (all caps please. The original version got bugged) by dropping an initial review. Cheers!

The entire sentence structure is a mess. I wasn't even able to read through the first paragraph. The author really needs to correct the sentences. I am not trying to be a grammar Nazi. I am simply saying to correct the sentence structure, make it readable please. Add colon's, quotation marks, paragraph breaks etc. The style of writing choosen is 3rd person narrative, but it kinda goes around the curve on most sentences. I am looking forward to see where this goes, if the author cleans up.

Decent if generic story about system weak to strong transmigrating alchemist. The r18 stuff is very random and forced for no real reason so far. Hands down the worst and only really unforgivable part is the fact that the author doesnt know how numbers work. In one sentence the mc has barely 10k gold and then in the next hes sellin something that he made for 100 gold for 100 million gold. Country and world population bounces all over too i think its a language thing but he needs to fix it cuz hes off by like 5 decimal places repeatedly

So this is the Core Guiding stage?

Kyouka: That thing or something looks like a wormhole or a rift! Kenji what the hell is that thing?!

Angel couldn't believe what just happened. she just got the insult of her life. she stared at the retreating figure of Jewel, until he was out of sight. she couldn't move an inch after Jewel left. she stood at the same position for up to 5 minutes. she had totally forgotten that she has a class to catch up with. After a while of standing alone, she slowly picked up her phone. she looked at the phone and realized that the screen had broken.

"So everyone basically know each other then?" Asked the girl laying in bay.

"Well by law you need to have someone champion you who you think can defeat the one who claimed you first in a duel." Sirius sighed "If your champion wins, you have 28 days to finalize the marriage. Anyone else elegible, and there are quite a few criteria, can try to defeat your champion during that time in a duel, but must give a 48 hour warning. Therefor most would marry their champions, if they win, before those first 2 days are over so no one else can try to duel him for you."

"anong big deal doon?" tanong ng girlfriend nya.