Izumi Miyamura: Xover - Reviews

what a nice beginning I hope you can continue it it would be a shame to stop and I would like to see where this is going...…………………………………………………………………...

excellent novel Please don't drop it       .                 .                   .                 .         .                        .                 .

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Have read till chapter 14, found no grammatical errors, story seems going in the right direction, the pacing is just right and honestly I can't point out any flaw in this story till chapter 14. I hope you maintain this quality and publish more chapters, I need more of them.

what is felt from the start it is easy to read. nice language. and intrigue from very first chapter

Miyako, who was only refusing as if she would say no even if she would die until a while ago, seems to have her switch flipped by that word, as she nodded *kokun* with her small chest throbbing, filled with expectation

While in the Ice Realm, Ying's parents tried to impart as much as they knew about the Mortal Realm to Ying. She was offered the best food available, because the upcoming future would most likely be tough.

He was very observant of Ottar and went for any openings he showed with no hesitation.

The only drawback is the fact that the translator is not being paid.It is simply great, I can't wait for the rest.__________________________________