It's Already the Third Time as Villainess - Reviews

MC daughter didn't even take his words seriously and he didn't know how to discipline them which makes the plot repeats every time what make it worse that the girls always disobeys him because he always forgive them everytime

I like the premise but you dragged out the build up to the party fro way too long. It shouldn't take 20 chapters to finally get to the party. The awakening was dragged out way too long, and every once an in a while you go on a tangent about his past thats not needed.

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"Nope," Nichiren replied with the shake of his head. "But I can stop him from dying."

Cara focused in on her blade and she worked towards the third Xantian Rung. The first rung was the name. The second was the appearance. The third rung wasn't something so superficial: it was the weapon's lattice.

What's wrong with him?

"Bang! Bang! Bang!"

and them baby Amy starts to scream,

"I don't know, I normally cook for myself. Plus then I know there's no spit or any other unwanted fluids in the food" It's true, you never know if the cook is having a bad day.

Kai: They didn't need to pay the fee for disposing of the medicine and made fifty/fifty. Everything will be upload after my promise with the fainting people.

Yup =w=

but never will. Has special ablity